Responsiblity

Responsibility is hard

Responsibility will batter you like a storm,

washing away your imagination like rain.

Making you frustrated or depressed.

To escape, you must be like me.

Hide from your responsibilities under the umbrella of immaturity

It will keep you, and your Pokemon cards dry.

 

Author's Note

Sorry, this is kind of a poem and kind of not a poem. Oh well, enjoy it anyways.

Reviews

[Sami Khalil]

"Hide from your responsibilities under the umbrella of immaturity

It will keep you, and your Pokemon cards dry."

[Goat]

Thank you for reading my poem!

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...:)................

[kylie.jo]

I really liked the "umbrella of immaturity"! Brilliant!

[kylie.jo]

I really liked the "umbrella of immaturity"! Brilliant!

[kylie.jo]

I really liked the "umbrella of immaturity"! Brilliant!

[kylie.jo]

I really liked the "umbrella of immaturity"! Brilliant!

[Goat]

Thank you!

[Michael Stevens]

Funny, funny, hiding from your responsibilities under an umbrella of immaturity!

[Goat]

Thanks, hiding from my responsibilities is one of my favorite hobbies!

[Michael Stevens]

I've made it into an art form!

[Goat]

Haha you may have to teach me your ways, master! I'm only at the "Ignore it and watch Disney movies" stage.

[Michael Stevens]

Well that works too!

[jacob erin-cilberto]

it's an amusing piece of honesty...
sometimes we just don't want to grow up...because what comes with that can weigh us down.

[Goat]

Thank you! That's why you have to stay a child at heart!

[Lyn Anderson]

Oh, I like your sense of humour. Smart, and who cares if it's "kind of a poem" it's interesting.

[Goat]

Thank you!

[1Disawsum]

aha "It will keep you, and your Pokemon cards dry" love the ending! The first line, it speaks the truth in so many ways! Adding to the pains of a daily lifestyle, you then have big responsibilities to carry, which only end up weighing you down even more, adding another black storm cloud around your head and mood.
I like this poem, it speaks a lot about the truth, and what everyone will have to face up to, even from such a young age nowadays. Responsibility. Well done!

[Goat]

Thank you! I'm glad you liked it!