Set It On Fire

Set It On Fire

A Poem by Tomislav Petricevic
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Dedicated to my dear school. *evil laugh*

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Let's set this school on fire,

Let's dig out many graves,

So we can throw the corpses

When we are done with games!


The time for fun's not over,

For us it just begun,

Your screams will fill the night

Because you cannot run!


The doom is set upon you,

You better kiss that cross,

Even though it won't be helpful

When you find your life at loss!


Let's set this school on fire,

Just to show them what we can,

Salvation's not an option,

Murder is the only plan!


© 2012 Tomislav Petricevic



Author's Note

Tomislav Petricevic
I know, not one of my best works. It's kinda very simple, but it didn't take me a lot of time to write it, so I guess the quality fits the time invested.
Anyways, leave honest reviews!
Thank you!
P.S. I'm not really a psycho...I think. XD

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lol i agree with river of glass... it seems angry but playful ^__^ your such a good writer!!!! i liked it alot keep it up :D

Posted 9 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I like the gleeful violence of of this. It's very angry, and kind of playful.
Unique.
It kinda reminds me of one of my poems. (it's called burn if you care).
All in all, I enjoyed this.

Posted 10 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

a little of balance, but still good.

Posted 10 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

lol...enjoyed this poem...

Posted 10 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

'Aight, GLaDOS. The world does not revolve around killing and neurotoxins, you know. Sheesh.

Posted 10 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Tomislav Petricevic

10 Months Ago

Yeah, I know it doesn't, sadly. lol
Anyways, thank you, Gretchen. :)
LOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOL!!!! Love this, it was amusing and filled my head with the many thoughts I've had to murder my math teacher.....hehe. Anyway, Awesome work!

Posted 10 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

♪The Girl Next Door♪

10 Months Ago

Unfortunately :P How long before a dead body starts to smell? XD
Tomislav Petricevic

10 Months Ago

I'm not sure, since I get rid of them right away...I mean, since I'm such a nice guy. XD
♪The Girl Next Door♪

10 Months Ago

Lol of course, of course. Well, I'm afraid I'm not as nice, I usually leave it nicely on their mothe.. read more

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Added on July 31, 2012
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Tomislav Petricevic
Tomislav Petricevic

Slavonski Brod, Slavonija, Croatia



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