Choice

Choice

A Poem by Tomislav Petricevic
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What choices to make in your life?

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Good or bad, make your choice,

Listen to your inner voice,

Stop pretending you don't care,

And dwell inside the heart's lair.


Your findings may leave you surprised,

With forgotten treasure you'll be prized,

Spread it all across the land,

And joy you will find so grand.


But you may wonder what to do,

If you find a loose screw,

But I will help you tighten it,

Until we fix every bit.


So the choice is trully clear,

Why the bad when good's so near?

Enjoy every breath you inhale,

And your liberty will leave a trail.

© 2012 Tomislav Petricevic


Author's Note

Tomislav Petricevic
Tell me, what do you think? I know it's not a perfect poem, but it took me about 15-20 minutes to write it, so I'm satisfied.

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Very good, this flows really well!


Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I love this! So powerful. Almost like a rap ^-^

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

The end just was shocking I love end rhymes man! You may be one of my favorite writers out of published books I've read. :O)

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Every step we make is a choice, we choose happy or sad, good or bad; if we take it one step at a time, fixing each problem as we go, then yes my friend the choice is truly clear. Well worded sentiment, nicley written. Thanks for sharing this.

Posted 11 Years Ago


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Wow! Awesome poem! The rhyming scheme is very nice(I always like poems in an a/a/b/b format) your thoughts are well streamed and the flow is wonderful. Great write!

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I really liked this...great job :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


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Good write!

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Good poem. I like the paart abut finding a "loose screw."

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Tomislav Petricevic
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Slavonski Brod, Slavonija, Croatia



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