Decaying World

QWERTY style poem I challenged myself to write.

Questions wither eternally,

Ripping today's youths unenthusiastically idle observations.

Profound answers state differences,

Fundamentally growing hatred.

Jealousy knits loathing zealously,

Xerothermically controlling violable brains.

Narrow-mindness masters.

Author's Note

Xerothermic - what is that all about? Well, the definition would be that it's something both dry and hot.
So by that I meant to say: really exhaustingly.
And I won't mind if you think all those synonyms and stuff are full of shit xD
But be honest and tell me your opinion.

Reviews

[Taylor H.]

so short and so deep

[Wolfhilde]

I liked it! very well done

[December Blaize]

This is amazing! It certainly captures the darker, pessimistic state of the world today. Your words ring sad and true, and it all flows together pretty well. Great write, you won the Deepest QWERTY award in my contest!

[♪The Girl Next Do..]

I love it! Good write!

[Rosallia]

You're a fantastic poet. And you obviously know what a thesaurus is (yay for you!) =)

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

Clear and without temper, well done.

[Angelic Surrender]

It's true, and the message is clear: Take care of yourself and your world and try actually giving a s**t about important things. Nice work :)

[jennifer little]

nice work i liked it great job keep up the good work thanks for sharing it with me

[xSamilynnx]

lol its cool but so many big words O.o this poor blondes head almost exploded haha..... really good as always