The Night Of A Bite

The Night Of A Bite

A Poem by Ellusive Rose
"

A girl's memories of a vampire

"

I never will forget that night

When the silver haired boy

Took his first bite

Under the luminous moon

He stood

Draped in the cloth of light

I stood

Watching him

HIs silver hair bright

Then he turned to me

His eyes the color of which he craved

He came to me

Looking in my eyes

And embraced me

Stuck there

In his stone cold arms

I was his prey

And that was all

He lifted my neck

And licked it plafully

Then he bit it

And the sky turned red

That sound

The sound of my life draining away

Is the hardest thing to hear

Then he let go

I fainted

And flew away

When I came to

A rose was beside me

Yes I never will forget him

My first vampire love

 

A Night Of A Bite

© 2009 Ellusive Rose


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Ellusive Rose
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Oo, this was really cool! I could just imagine the whole thing in my head! Your poem was amazing! It was beautifully written, greatly detailed, and wonderfully descriptive! You know, I bet if you evermade this into a story or something, it would be awesome! :D Amazing job!

Posted 14 Years Ago



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Added on June 23, 2009
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Ellusive Rose
Ellusive Rose

Valley Stream, NY



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Hi, i am a 16 year old girl who loves to write and draw more than anything. Im just starting out with writng stories, so please don't be hard on me okay? That doesn't mean leave out important deta.. more..

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