Past-Present-Future

Past-Present-Future

A Poem by Ellusive Rose
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Me and my friend...

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Past-Present-Future

In the past

We were as tight as theives

Yes indeed we was

Transfered schools

Didn't know where I was

But you helped me along

Till one wasn't enough

Double-dutching on the concreate

Not knowing when to cross the street

Having our little fights

And even crying over spilled milk

Oh how the time has passed

 

Now whe go our seperate ways

You with your group

And me with mine

Hopefully we will meet in the middle

Hopefully I pray

Now our minds on boys

That fancy our intrests

Giving us no time to say hello

Oh how the time has passed

 

We will meet again

And be as tight

As we use to be

Laughing about

What we've seen

Things we been through

And relationships that just went wrong

Yes I know we will

For that is our

Past-Present-And Future

 

© 2009 Ellusive Rose


Author's Note

Ellusive Rose
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This is great!!! And I think a ton of people could relate, I think for a writer to do that, is amazing talent awesome job! Continue writing!

~Weaza~

Posted 14 Years Ago


Ah, this is fantastic! A lovely poem, and its imagery struck me as bold and insightful. And indeed, we've all been at that stage when we and our friends go our seperate ways but always retain that connection. You have a fantastic writing style, too.

Posted 14 Years Ago


very good, clearly executed and well written :)

Posted 14 Years Ago



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Added on July 6, 2009

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Ellusive Rose
Ellusive Rose

Valley Stream, NY



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Hi, i am a 16 year old girl who loves to write and draw more than anything. Im just starting out with writng stories, so please don't be hard on me okay? That doesn't mean leave out important deta.. more..

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