Blackout

A short Acronym poem

 

Burning hot fire under my skin
 Losing myself to a monster
 Angry, frustrated, and broken I lash out again...
 Can't you understand?!
 Keep away before the beast is released
 Or you will end up a pointless martyr
 Understand that I can't even save myself
 The demon takes over when I blackout.

Reviews

[Shaquana Adams]

This reminds me of a scene from the movie Anger Management. Nice word usage. Demons, martyr, beast, monster, broken, lash, burning. I love this poem! Great job!

[Sami Khalil]

A good one...:).................

[RachelReaper]

the word choice in this is so powerful. I could feel your emotions coming through in this.

[Riley Bray]

I love how strong this poem is, as well as how it adopts a voice of its own. Wonderful start and welcome to writerscafe!

[Phantom.Bite]

Thank you :) you guys have really encouraged me

[Just Kim]

This is wonderful, i like this write it's dark. Awesome!