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Rave girl


A Poem by Ashes
"
Her skirt flared as she danced to the strobe lights and the DJ's mixes
"

 

Her body swung to the beat

on the overcrowded dance floor

moving faster than the electronic music

in purplegreenblue strobe lights

 

Her skirt flares

and there’s confetti in the air

to paint the glittered skin of the swaying, hypnotic, bodies

catching eyes for only a moment

the DJ started a new mix and she was carried away

 

Applause

the beats get harder

a hint of red slips through the shadows

and the crowd disappears in to the night

before morning routine breaks the atmosphere

she dances home to the beat in her head


© 2008 Ashes



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Author's Note

I wrote this at midnight while listening to waaaay to much techno and \"Pretty Rave girl\".

I found the icon picture at: http://s49.photobucket.com/albums/f261/Ayamepetals/anime/girls/
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