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yikes i double posted review. anyway, what i meant to say when i was on painkillers due to dental work yesterday lol, was that the season in your setting adds to the fear in your story. and i also wanted to say that your characters are frightening even before become eaters of their own, just by the virtue of their ignorance. the story also made me think of when a crime should be paid for by an entire community or just acting individuals. my example was ( people who lived near concentration camps in total denial or indifference to the horrors being committed on fellow humans (how could they ignore the smells?) i always thought that they should have had to be held accountable and not just by God. I am not articulating well, lol, thats it, tylenol for me now. this story is good inspiration for my own work as i could probably pay more attention to settings, especially weather and seasons as they can certainly set a mood from the first sentence.
Posted 2 Years Ago
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