Short Nothings

Short Nothings

‎"I miss my Home"

Only if I knew where she was, is it an actual place or the feeling of belonging. The 

comfort zone when laying your head down for a nights sleep? Is it overrated or 

underrated? Does one even vote on such things? Is it a place or is it a person that makes 

home, home. I miss her so much. I want her back. They say "home is where the heart is"

well my heart is empty so I guess I need to go buy some furniture.

Reviews

[Neva Flores Smith - Cha..]

my mind took off wondering what the furniture could be. I am sure it is not the wooden and cloth kind. I have moved 4 times in the past 4 months and I certainly know about home not feeling like home. It is kind of like the idea of being alone in a room full of people.......excellent piece.

[Tamia123]

They say "home is wherre the heart is" well my heart is empty so i guess I need to go by some furniture. Pure genious!!! Amazing story! I love it!

[A Red Red Rose 4 U Luv]

LOL!!! Thats last sentence is very funny, though the whole thing is sad. I like it though and the heart is never empty, no matter what you feel. And home is where the heart is, and it goes with you everywhere!!

[mij nosirrom]

I like the humor at the end. It puts perspective into "soul searching". In my opinion, most of my self-deprecating longings are just "Whoa-is-me" b_llsh_t!

[Allan Eddings]

I thoroughly enjoyed reading this delightful little piece. It has a wonderful dry, droll, wit running throughout which lightens and heightens the sincere, and pained, question it is begging to be answered.

Bravo! I enjoyed that it did not linger in a maudlin place but nor did it deny the sadness of not feeling entirely at home anywhere. I must read more of your work now!

Thank you for sharing and do keep writing,
A.E.

[Distant horizons]

Know this feeling well. Like not ever feeling quite whole. well captured in such a short write. great job.

[Sabrina Claridge]

Oh! Love this! Especially the last line. This seems to be very well thought out and I really appreciate the angst in this a lot. Well done, as always.

[michael.c.m]

Great last line. good sentence structures.