Sea Pollution

Sea Pollution

A Poem by Phill Oz O'fee
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This is our legacy ... if it continues!

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Sea Pollution




Oceanic life

Plastic wrapped to extinction

Before we know it


Phillozofee @ 2017

© 2017 Phill Oz O'fee


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raw & poignant. this is disgusting & incredible. was just reading about a young entrepreneur who has made a barrier that collects floating plastic and resells it for recycling. it's being tested between california and hawaii. must become a personal battle for all. we only get one planet ...

Posted 6 Years Ago


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Excellent! Usually I'm not completely convinced by such a short message about a huge issue. But in this case, you packed a whollup into your singular observation with a nice deep stab of sarcasm ("plastic-wrapped"). Even more admirable becuz you are sticking to a strict poetic form. The last line is a little passive for me, like this is simply a phenomenon without any sense of responsibility or owning of the problem. But overall the message works well.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

raw & poignant. this is disgusting & incredible. was just reading about a young entrepreneur who has made a barrier that collects floating plastic and resells it for recycling. it's being tested between california and hawaii. must become a personal battle for all. we only get one planet ...

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

OMG, what a horrific image! Your eloquent and expressive words and image depict the destruction that we are doing to our seas and their innocent inhabitants. "Plastic wrapped to extinction"- brilliant line. Sad situation. Thanks for posting this.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I really loved this, short but the words really ring with the brutal truth

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I think we are surrounded by pollution everywhere. Sea pollution is just one of a kind but how horrific the image you chose. Your words and the image complement each other.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Never was a truer nightmare said or written.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Sea pollution is one of the major problem, I'm glad you took a step to write something on sea pollution. people don't want garbage in their surrounding but they always spread it in other creatures surroundings ..very good choice

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Phill Oz O'fee
Phill Oz O'fee

Winchester, Hampshire, England, United Kingdom



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