Corollary

Corollary

A Poem by Phill Oz O'fee
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Listen up ..........

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Corollary




We did tell them so

They ignored the evidence

You reap what you sow


Copyright @ Phillozofee 2017


© 2017 Phill Oz O'fee



Author's Note

Phill Oz O'fee
Forming a proposition that follows from one already proved

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Poor nature... even bees couldn't escape from human's actions, I don't know if we will ever plants flowers all over the world, and when I say flowers, I don't mean only the real ones, but their symbols too, beauty, peace, Love... a thoughtful profound piece.

Posted 3 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Phill Oz O'fee

3 Months Ago

Thank you for your kind words .. :-)



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yes, the symbols are dying of thirst----starving for the sunlight of love----and those who spend their lives humming with love songs...they are starving because of the hate---the weeds are taking over.

Posted 3 Months Ago


Wonderful visual! Written similar not long ago but in far too much detail. So, now bow to your skill in saying little, but doing so much more than others!

Posted 3 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Phill Oz O'fee

3 Months Ago

Compact and bijou observations - thanks for your kind review :-)
No pollination.. no food
We have heard the news..
but what is being done....

"quid pro quo"..

Jazzy..

Posted 3 Months Ago


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We humans have become so selfish and ignorant that we don't hesitate to ruin someone for our gain. We have bound ourselves in self made borders.
Very well expressed!

Posted 3 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Thirst for power has led to the starvation of many innocent souls. Very nicely penned!

Posted 3 Months Ago


I love how powerful this poem is and how even more powerful the picture makes it. I love your views on nature and your poems are amazing.

Posted 3 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Phill Oz O'fee

3 Months Ago

My thanks to you ... for a humbling review... :-)
Love this picture and extremely relevant poem! All the evidence is crying out to us- the bees and so many other creatures are dying off- yet the 'powers that be' ignore the situation and the risks. I applaud this poem for making a perfect statement, perfectly!

Posted 3 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Phill Oz O'fee

3 Months Ago

Thanks friend ... just hope some positive action intervenes so the next generation does not suffer .. read more
Poor nature... even bees couldn't escape from human's actions, I don't know if we will ever plants flowers all over the world, and when I say flowers, I don't mean only the real ones, but their symbols too, beauty, peace, Love... a thoughtful profound piece.

Posted 3 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Phill Oz O'fee

3 Months Ago

Thank you for your kind words .. :-)

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Phill Oz O'fee
Phill Oz O'fee

Winchester, Hampshire, England, United Kingdom



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I am caught in a time spiral of confusion; that period we all experience between birth and death. Somewhere inside hides a poet, writer, lyricist and/or whatever, laying dormant and suppressed by s.. more..

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