Ruin Vows

Ruin Vows

A Poem by Phill Oz O'fee

Ruin Vows



Broken promises

Chipping away on the heart

Damages true love


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© 2017 Phill Oz O'fee



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Very true, you couldn't have said it better

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Well my friend, i read this piece when i needed the comfort, and it did comfort me. promises are like the cement mending walls of true love

Posted 2 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Such power in such few words. Really beautiful

Posted 2 Months Ago


Phill Oz O'fee

2 Months Ago

Thank you for saying so .... :-)
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Gul
This is the best example of "less words with huge meaning."

Posted 2 Months Ago


Phill Oz O'fee

2 Months Ago

Thank you very much ..... :-)
:) broken promises..
unsaid words..
no time for love..
guess end of the story :P

i enjoyed reading it and such cute pic

Posted 2 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Phill Oz O'fee

2 Months Ago

Thanks - glad you liked the pic as well ... :-)
They keep chipping, indeed. I liked it very much!

Posted 2 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Phill Oz O'fee

2 Months Ago

Thank you very much ... :-)
very clever photo and the Senyru is
penned with mystical sadness and remorse.
truly, Pat

Posted 2 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Phill Oz O'fee

2 Months Ago

Thank you Pat - glad you liked it ... :-)
Patricia Wedel

2 Months Ago

You are welcome...
i agree with the sentiment of the senryu.....
and totally separately.....

the picture ignites a fiery picture of a thousand words....

j.

Posted 2 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Phill Oz O'fee

2 Months Ago

Thank you for your kind review .. :-)
and there is a lot of wood chips in the woods

Posted 2 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Phill Oz O'fee

2 Months Ago

Yes there certainly is - thans for reading my share ... :-)
So true, Phil. Nothing worse in love or business...promises are meant to be kept, otherwise we chip away at the foundation until the structure collapses.
Good write.
Tk

Posted 2 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Phill Oz O'fee

2 Months Ago

Thanks Ted - your words are most appreciated ... :-)

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Phill Oz O'fee
Phill Oz O'fee

Winchester, Hampshire, England, United Kingdom



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I am caught in a time spiral of confusion; that period we all experience between birth and death. Somewhere inside hides a poet, writer, lyricist and/or whatever, laying dormant and suppressed by s.. more..

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