Deviant Desire

Deviant Desire

A Poem by Phill Oz O'fee
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Just random ..........!

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Deviant Desire




Gratification

Depends on your perspective

Of pleasure or pain


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© 2017 Phill Oz O'fee



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What a brilliantly contrived photograph! But, I wonder which came first.. the words oe the picture? For sure, your words Your words have the same intriguing depth, a strange wondering what if.. what of..

This post is far more than clever or surreal.. it's 'pon another plain but don't know which. Will think. (might take a while)

Posted 11 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Phill Oz O'fee

11 Months Ago

Words first ........ the picture; what can I say ... just grabbed my attention and had to use it wit.. read more
emmajoy

11 Months Ago

Great togetherness.



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indeed it does. fabulous pic to go along with deep philosophical words ...

Posted 11 Months Ago


Well, I wouldn't call this just random....! ;) I agree with Emma about the brilliant contrast of your write and the pic. I guess it all depends on perspectives....
Interestingly thought provoking (:

Posted 11 Months Ago


Very powerful wisdom filled words. Thank you

Posted 11 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Very nicely done. In poetry, less is always more. I like how you used the line breaks to add more weight to the poem, and the image goes well with it.

Posted 11 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

a favorite genre of mine, nicely written.

Posted 11 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

What a brilliantly contrived photograph! But, I wonder which came first.. the words oe the picture? For sure, your words Your words have the same intriguing depth, a strange wondering what if.. what of..

This post is far more than clever or surreal.. it's 'pon another plain but don't know which. Will think. (might take a while)

Posted 11 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Phill Oz O'fee

11 Months Ago

Words first ........ the picture; what can I say ... just grabbed my attention and had to use it wit.. read more
emmajoy

11 Months Ago

Great togetherness.
Ooooh- scary picture! Edgy, noir, perfect Senryu here. Yes, as you so well and thought-provokingly present, everything is a matter of “perspective”....

Posted 11 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Phill Oz O'fee

11 Months Ago

Thank you ........

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Phill Oz O'fee
Phill Oz O'fee

Winchester, Hampshire, England, United Kingdom



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I am caught in a time spiral of confusion; that period we all experience between birth and death. Somewhere inside hides a poet, writer, lyricist and/or whatever, laying dormant and suppressed by s.. more..

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