Steadfast

Steadfast

A Poem by Phill Oz O'fee
"

Never giving up ...........

"

Steadfast




Look after your dreams

As precious aspirations

Are worth waiting for


Copyright @ Phillozofee 2017


© 2017 Phill Oz O'fee



My Review

Would you like to review this Poem?
Login | Register




Reviews

Beautiful title, beautiful photo, and I like that it presents a child, because we must always remember when we were children and how nothing stopped us from dreaming, everything come at its right time, then, it just comes rightly and fully, and until then... let us enjoy each moment of the process.

Posted 3 Days Ago


To me, the key word here is "waiting" . . . everything good in life takes time. Your message & chosen artwork go together well as a simple inspiration (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

Posted 3 Days Ago


*Welcome to "Pure Rhymes" Thanks for joining, great to have you...!*

They really are... A precious message shared... Thank you...

Posted 1 Week Ago


Love this image and senryu Phill. Your message is so uplifting and important. Yes, we still have dreams and must always follow them! Kudos!

Posted 2 Weeks Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Such a wonderful picture to accompany your fine and beautiful words. The entire post has a certin something in it..has a special touch as one veers backand forth against its calmness.. and prayerr..

Wonderful. and yes, worth waiting for

Posted 3 Weeks Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

if we are patient....
our dreams may come.

and be more than we imagined.

Posted 4 Weeks Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

So true... without dreams, what would we be..

Love the HOPE.......

Jazzy..

Posted 4 Weeks Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

i think i will try to keep this one with me today ...full of positive, healthy glow says i! and i like the pic a lot as well!
E.

Posted 4 Weeks Ago


Nice write... and motivational one too.

Dear, "....Are worth waiting for" feels like a clause that needs completion. The clause can be defined by "They", "it is", or even remove the "are"
e.g
They are worth waiting for
It is worth waiting for
Worth waiting for.

Nevertheless, the point is vivid and can be used as quote.

Posted 4 Weeks Ago



Request Read Request
Add to Library My Library
Subscribe Subscribe


Stats

162 Views
9 Reviews
Rating
Added on October 20, 2017
Last Updated on November 14, 2017

Author

Phill Oz O'fee
Phill Oz O'fee

Winchester, Hampshire, England, United Kingdom



About
I am caught in a time spiral of confusion; that period we all experience between birth and death. Somewhere inside hides a poet, writer, lyricist and/or whatever, laying dormant and suppressed by s.. more..

Writing

Related Writing

People who liked this story also liked..


Am Blind... Am Blind...

A Poem by Surya


LIfe Ends LIfe Ends

A Poem by Norbanus