Lava Lust

Lava Lust

A Poem by Phill Oz O'fee
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Passion overload ........

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Lava Lust



Molten energy

Expelled through aching desire

For passionate love


Copyright @ Phillozofee 2017





© 2017 Phill Oz O'fee



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I love your words, the intensity and the visual in the photo!! All come together to convey dark, vivid, tempting desire... passionate and perfect!

Posted 3 Months Ago


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Would you Adam 'n' Eve it, a haiku with 'em in it. Clever

Posted 4 Months Ago


I really don't care for bright red apples! Haiku's interesting however.

Posted 4 Months Ago


This haiku/ senyru comes together qute nicely...the photo of the apple and snake shows just how temping and strong desire can be..nice

Posted 4 Months Ago


Boom- mind blown! Enough said- perfectly and passionately. Love this Phill my friend!

Posted 4 Months Ago


lol.... nice poem...just don't like the pic :P (snakesss)
if you use a molten lava chocolate cup cake it would look more appealing to eyes lol.. ;) (to my eyes)

mmm reminds me of volcanic explosion inside the soul :P


Posted 4 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Phill Oz O'fee

4 Months Ago

Check out this link - they DO exist; https://morkeschocolates.com/chocolate-snake/
Rapunzel

4 Months Ago

Yuckyyyy ..Phill... i did not say both together... E. soemthings wrong with him lol (secret) lol
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Einstein Noodle

4 Months Ago

ahahaha sorry Phil...i'm not biting ...ahahahahaha!
sums it up in a coiled spring :) nice work with the metaphor and personifications .. and in a succinct haiku form .. a stimulating read for me! :)
E.

Posted 4 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Phill Oz O'fee

4 Months Ago

Wanted to also suggest an Adam & Eve connection ... Thanks for the review my friend! :-)
Einstein Noodle

4 Months Ago

well..its there all right...i didn't want to look to long at the pic for fear of falling ;)))

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Added on December 11, 2017
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Phill Oz O'fee
Phill Oz O'fee

Winchester, Hampshire, England, United Kingdom



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I am caught in a time spiral of confusion; that period we all experience between birth and death. Somewhere inside hides a poet, writer, lyricist and/or whatever, laying dormant and suppressed by s.. more..

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