Taste The Frost

Taste The Frost

A Poem by Phill Oz O'fee
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Winter's love ...........

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Taste The Frost




They played

In shifting drifts of a billion ice crystals

Eager participants

Laughingly tumbling in encrusted arms

Misty breathes

Pluming in unison heart shaped clouds

Winter innocence

Encapsulating the shared icy pleasures


Watery eyes

Blinked clear to behold a common vision

Their mutuality

Of being blessed to be a loving couple

How crisp

The freshness of this especial season

Sharpens focus

Of the most important things to embrace


To taste

The frost upon each other’s yearning lips

Sends chills

Of inestimable bliss throughout their being

No frozen

Passion between these lovers ardent goal

To melt

Slowly into entwined nakedness back home


Copyright @ Phillozofee 2017


© 2017 Phill Oz O'fee



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This is beautifully vivid to all the senses. I much prefer it when you take more time & craft the longer messages. Altho you do the 17-syllable form well, it's nothing compared to the way you do a poem like this. Your imagery goes on forever & your sensations are very recognizable (even tho I don't enjoy the cold at all!) I guess some people just love that snotty nose bump of true infatuation! *wink! wink!* Here's wishing you & your loved ones an awesome Christmas! (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

Posted 9 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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Great choice of vivid verbs and adjectives, they created tremendous imagery. I also loved your incorporation of the senses into the piece. Overall, a fantastic poem!

Posted 7 Months Ago


Beautifully intimate poem. Your ability to create imagery and emotion is amazing. Amazing job!

Posted 8 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

The beautiful paint with the use of beautiful words.
loved it

Posted 9 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This was a very good read. I could picture your writing play out in my mind. This chills and all.

Posted 9 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is beautifully vivid to all the senses. I much prefer it when you take more time & craft the longer messages. Altho you do the 17-syllable form well, it's nothing compared to the way you do a poem like this. Your imagery goes on forever & your sensations are very recognizable (even tho I don't enjoy the cold at all!) I guess some people just love that snotty nose bump of true infatuation! *wink! wink!* Here's wishing you & your loved ones an awesome Christmas! (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

Posted 9 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

ROMANTIC YOUNG LOVE YOU DRAW THE PICTURE SO WELL... NOTHING BUT THEM, THE SNOW, THE SENSUAL DELIGHTS AND THE LOOKING FORWARD TO THEIR WARMTH TOGETHER AT HOME...
BEFORE THE HARSHER ADULT WORLD ARRIVES
THEIR UTOPIA SWEETLY AND SO WELL DRAWN!

Posted 10 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

So sweet and sensual. Love the picture- “Winter Innocence”- yes! Wonderful memories evoked. Great form with short alternating with long lines, , flow, cadence, imagery...A beautiful snowflake of a poem!

Posted 10 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

To taste
The frost upon each other’s yearning lips
Sends chills
Of inestimable bliss throughout their being

:) this is cute and sweet and very nice poem for the season....

Posted 10 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

You paint the scene well....I always said snow is sexy...lol
seriously ...there's something that draws us to naturally seek to be close when it's cold and the intimacy just seems more amazing when it is bitter outside.

Posted 10 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

A beautifully sensitive and well written celebration of love in Wintertime-a lovely capture of that special moment that is the everlasting now. Great writing, a pleasure to read

Posted 10 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Phill Oz O'fee
Phill Oz O'fee

Winchester, Hampshire, England, United Kingdom



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