Taste The Frost

Winter's love ...........

Taste The Frost

They played

In shifting drifts of a billion ice crystals

Eager participants

Laughingly tumbling in encrusted arms

Misty breathes

Pluming in unison heart shaped clouds

Winter innocence

Encapsulating the shared icy pleasures

Watery eyes

Blinked clear to behold a common vision

Their mutuality

Of being blessed to be a loving couple

How crisp

The freshness of this especial season

Sharpens focus

Of the most important things to embrace

To taste

The frost upon each other’s yearning lips

Sends chills

Of inestimable bliss throughout their being

No frozen

Passion between these lovers ardent goal

To melt

Slowly into entwined nakedness back home

Copyright @ Phillozofee 2017

Reviews

[barleygirl]

This is beautifully vivid to all the senses. I much prefer it when you take more time & craft the longer messages. Altho you do the 17-syllable form well, it's nothing compared to the way you do a poem like this. Your imagery goes on forever & your sensations are very recognizable (even tho I don't enjoy the cold at all!) I guess some people just love that snotty nose bump of true infatuation! *wink! wink!* Here's wishing you & your loved ones an awesome Christmas! (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

[repituugjng]

Great choice of vivid verbs and adjectives, they created tremendous imagery. I also loved your incorporation of the senses into the piece. Overall, a fantastic poem!

[TheRavensWoods]

Beautifully intimate poem. Your ability to create imagery and emotion is amazing. Amazing job!

[Priyanshi]

The beautiful paint with the use of beautiful words.
loved it

[Diane]

This was a very good read. I could picture your writing play out in my mind. This chills and all.

[marilyn 1225]

ROMANTIC YOUNG LOVE YOU DRAW THE PICTURE SO WELL... NOTHING BUT THEM, THE SNOW, THE SENSUAL DELIGHTS AND THE LOOKING FORWARD TO THEIR WARMTH TOGETHER AT HOME...
BEFORE THE HARSHER ADULT WORLD ARRIVES
THEIR UTOPIA SWEETLY AND SO WELL DRAWN!

[Annette Pisano-Higley]

So sweet and sensual. Love the picture- “Winter Innocence”- yes! Wonderful memories evoked. Great form with short alternating with long lines, , flow, cadence, imagery...A beautiful snowflake of a poem!

[Ardra]

To taste
The frost upon each other’s yearning lips
Sends chills
Of inestimable bliss throughout their being

:) this is cute and sweet and very nice poem for the season....

[J. Hampton]

You paint the scene well....I always said snow is sexy...lol
seriously ...there's something that draws us to naturally seek to be close when it's cold and the intimacy just seems more amazing when it is bitter outside.

[George Coombs]

A beautifully sensitive and well written celebration of love in Wintertime-a lovely capture of that special moment that is the everlasting now. Great writing, a pleasure to read