Doigts Soyeux

Grab your google translate - and - an ice cube!

Doigts Soyeux

Arousing vibrations from your sultry silken touch

Exhilarates my basics senses to delirious heights

And as I turn attention to your wanton waiting lips

You breathe out very softly, ‘Je suis à toi seul’

Misty pooling eyes of emerald green intensely gaze

Deep into the mainstay of my innermost singularity

Sending esteem pulsing waves of exhilarating passion

I gently sigh, ‘mon coeur est donné librement’

Our bodies smoulder in a mutual ardour harmonic furnace

Illuminating melded hearts in our private secret sanctuary

Encapsulating our instances where there is only bonding

‘C'est la lumière de notre amour pur et intemporel’

There is no need rushing respectful playful pleasures

As the night has blessed us by being especially long

Exploring the most of what we gift unselfishly tonight

‘Dans l'attention indivise à notre amour extraordinaire’

Copyright @ Phillozofee 2018

Reviews

[Ardra]

‘C'est la lumière de notre amour pur et intemporel’

mmm loved this line... thanks to google :P

don't you just love writing things which makes others to sit and wonder what your wrote hehe.. :P

sure seems like the poem one would write for 14th Feb ;)

[Phill Oz O'fee]

Valentine was an inspiration - thus the feature highlight! Thank you for your glorious review :-)

[Ardra]

i did notice tht :)
i did read it last time but i dint get time to google... :P
now i sure had time to read it peacefully...
am thinking of writing something for Vdy...words brewing up slowly...lets see :P

[emmajoy]

An extravagance of love-language with the somewhat potent addition of les phrases Francaises! Read three times, impressed by the wording .. but seems more of that than a natural display of heart. Perhaps.

[Phill Oz O'fee]

Thank you Emma - PS love the new avatar ... :-)

[emmajoy]

You're welcome, as ever. Tis me recovering from measles - with wee friend, Chivers, come to hug me. :)

[J. J. Nightingale]

Silky fingers...
A warm/hot telling
of love and devotion
and all the mutual pleasure
therein..

wow................

Jazzy...

[Phill Oz O'fee]

Merci du fond du cœur mon cher ami - :-)

[J. J. Nightingale]

Vous êtes les bienvenus gentil monsieur.......J.J.

[Great Aunt Astri]

A lovely tribute to love felt and shared. Your words speak volumes, and are a delight to read.

[Phill Oz O'fee]

Thank you my friend :-)

[Great Aunt Astri]

You are welcome

[emipoemi]

.......I quite enjoyed this!! It's lilting to some extant with phenomenally strong imagery, and the narrative is quite profound, flowing nicely and fluidly towards the end. The French added some great pizzazz to this, and really threw the energy and power of the poem over the top. My only critique would be to add some punctuation, for especially in Stanza 3, I had to read Line 1 over about 3 times before I realized that "mutual ardour" and "fierier harmony" were two separate ideas (punctuation guides the readers in how to read the poem, so it helps a fair bit).

This is overall superb, and you should be proud of it! Well done!

[Phill Oz O'fee]

Thank you for your kind review - I see what you mean (Stanza 3) - made a couple of tweaks :-)