Doigts Soyeux

Doigts Soyeux

A Poem by Phill Oz O'fee
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Doigts Soyeux



Arousing vibrations from your sultry silken touch

Exhilarates my basics senses to delirious heights

And as I turn attention to your wanton waiting lips


You breathe out very softly, ‘Je suis à toi seul’


Misty pooling eyes of emerald green intensely gaze

Deep into the mainstay of my innermost singularity

Sending esteem pulsing waves of exhilarating passion


I gently sigh, ‘mon coeur est donné librement’


Our bodies smoulder in a mutual ardour harmonic furnace

Illuminating melded hearts in our private secret sanctuary

Encapsulating our instances where there is only bonding


C'est la lumière de notre amour pur et intemporel’


There is no need rushing respectful playful pleasures

As the night has blessed us by being especially long

Exploring the most of what we gift unselfishly tonight


Dans l'attention indivise à notre amour extraordinaire’


Copyright @ Phillozofee 2018



© 2018 Phill Oz O'fee



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‘C'est la lumière de notre amour pur et intemporel’

mmm loved this line... thanks to google :P

don't you just love writing things which makes others to sit and wonder what your wrote hehe.. :P

sure seems like the poem one would write for 14th Feb ;)


Posted 1 Week Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Phill Oz O'fee

1 Week Ago

Valentine was an inspiration - thus the feature highlight! Thank you for your glorious review :-)
Galadriel

1 Week Ago

i did notice tht :)
i did read it last time but i dint get time to google... :P
now i.. read more



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‘C'est la lumière de notre amour pur et intemporel’

mmm loved this line... thanks to google :P

don't you just love writing things which makes others to sit and wonder what your wrote hehe.. :P

sure seems like the poem one would write for 14th Feb ;)


Posted 1 Week Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Phill Oz O'fee

1 Week Ago

Valentine was an inspiration - thus the feature highlight! Thank you for your glorious review :-)
Galadriel

1 Week Ago

i did notice tht :)
i did read it last time but i dint get time to google... :P
now i.. read more
An extravagance of love-language with the somewhat potent addition of les phrases Francaises! Read three times, impressed by the wording .. but seems more of that than a natural display of heart. Perhaps.

Posted 3 Weeks Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Phill Oz O'fee

3 Weeks Ago

Thank you Emma - PS love the new avatar ... :-)
emmajoy

3 Weeks Ago

You're welcome, as ever. Tis me recovering from measles - with wee friend, Chivers, come to hug me.. read more
Silky fingers...
A warm/hot telling
of love and devotion
and all the mutual pleasure
therein..

wow................

Jazzy...

Posted 1 Month Ago


Phill Oz O'fee

1 Month Ago

Merci du fond du cœur mon cher ami - :-)
J. J.  Nightingale

1 Month Ago

Vous êtes les bienvenus gentil monsieur.......J.J.
A lovely tribute to love felt and shared. Your words speak volumes, and are a delight to read.

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Phill Oz O'fee

1 Month Ago

Thank you my friend :-)
Great Aunt Astri

1 Month Ago

You are welcome
.......I quite enjoyed this!! It's lilting to some extant with phenomenally strong imagery, and the narrative is quite profound, flowing nicely and fluidly towards the end. The French added some great pizzazz to this, and really threw the energy and power of the poem over the top. My only critique would be to add some punctuation, for especially in Stanza 3, I had to read Line 1 over about 3 times before I realized that "mutual ardour" and "fierier harmony" were two separate ideas (punctuation guides the readers in how to read the poem, so it helps a fair bit).

This is overall superb, and you should be proud of it! Well done!

Posted 1 Month Ago


Phill Oz O'fee

1 Month Ago

Thank you for your kind review - I see what you mean (Stanza 3) - made a couple of tweaks :-)

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Phill Oz O'fee
Phill Oz O'fee

Winchester, Hampshire, England, United Kingdom



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I am caught in a time spiral of confusion; that period we all experience between birth and death. Somewhere inside hides a poet, writer, lyricist and/or whatever, laying dormant and suppressed by s.. more..

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