Love Lyophilized

When love leaves you empty ............

Love Lyophilized

You freeze-dried my heart

Until it crumbled to dust

Then blew it away

Copyright @ Phillozofee 2018

Reviews

[barleygirl]

Short & sweet, yet full of interesting ideas & wordplay. Good job teaching me a new word (the title) & good reflection of this concept in your message! Your imagination is off the charts & I always crave something new in a love poem! (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

[Phill Oz O'fee]

Thank you my friend - I love new words and try my best to poetically present them :-)

[emmajoy]

You're welcome. I owe so many reviews.

Am nowable to go swimming, ride a bike and smile a lot more.. thank you!

[Aesthetic Trash]

This haiku was lovely. It may have only had 3 stanzas, but it was full of emotion and sentimental thoughts. Or might I say SEDIMENTAL THOUGHTS? Ignore that, that was a terrible pun. I agree with Margie on this one, thank you for teaching me a new word.

[H L Rose]

Creative metaphor! The picture guides the image in my mind to be a person blowing dust out of their cupped hands, and I think it’s emotionally provoking.

I like it!

[Einstein Noodle]

should of seen it comin' eh!? wouldn't even give your speaker the right to be in pain ..as callous a lady as can get i think ..thanks for my new word "lyophilized" ... it wll be quite the challenge to use it ten times today and make it mine ;)
E.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

ouch...the colder the other heart....the hotter the ashes of what we have left are.
j.

[Kelly Scheppers]

You made me curious with that title, and like a cat, I had to pounce. I've never heard of the word, "lyophilized", but it certainly gives credence to your words.

What a clever piece!

[emmajoy]

Succinct - allowing the reader to find either the positive or negative your lack of ounctuation has allowed. Perhaps?

How i wish i could write so little yet say so much.

[Phill Oz O'fee]

Bless you - hope you are keeping well! :-)

[Stella Armour]

very clever senryu poem Phil, one of those that you remember long after you have first read it :)

[Ardra]

Free drying heart... very nice concept... :)

[Phill Oz O'fee]

Rehydration is even better ... :-)