Unrequited

Rejection sucks ……..

Unrequited

Feelings can get hurt

If love is left unanswered

Hitting a stone heart

Copyright @ Phillozofee 2018

Reviews

[Ardra]

Mmm....sometimes we are under the impression that how sea waves...after a lot of trial manage to break the wall.... just like that we are also capable....
But then maybe sometimes we are....otherwise it's just an illusion we create...to go on...isn't it Phill...

[LazerRays]

Stupid review sent before incould finish it :( anyways... I remember my unrequited love for the most popular girl at my school. It was awful. Idk if she liked me or not bit now this poem makes me wonder

[LazerRays]

Oh, unrequited love. I remember when I had unrequ

[LKBillips]

I love these little short and to the point poems. Sometimes you don't need all those words to strike to the truth of the matter. Nice one.

[Riddhi]

You wrote it beautifully Phill and the picture seemed perfect here...And actually feelings are hurted when love is left unanswered...
Keep on writing...

[TPK Stories]

The photo gave a good illustration to describe your words...raw and tragic. Excellent write in just a few words.