Maybe you'd write something interesting beyond three lines. Maybe a little something about pain, surgery, modern medicine, the modern hospital situation, maybe modern pharmacology, etc., etc.,
From a first person point of view perhaps? That could be spectacular.
If this is where you are at the moment, I sincerely hope you will be feeling better soon. Yep, those backless gowns are the pits aren't they? Take care Phill.
Chris
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At least I won't be face down on the gurney - thanks for message - :-)
Good luck, Phil. Love the poem. Not sure about the backless gown.
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Worst possible scenario; if all goes wrong, I am to be placed naked on all fours, epoxy resined, pla.. read moreWorst possible scenario; if all goes wrong, I am to be placed naked on all fours, epoxy resined, placed out into the car park and used as a place for the Surgeon to park his bicycle (sounds cheeky) ha ha ha - bless you for the comments. :-)
I am caught in a time spiral of confusion; that period we all experience between birth and death.
Somewhere inside hides a poet, writer, lyricist and/or whatever, laying dormant and suppressed by s.. more..