Amatorculist

Amatorculist

A Poem by Phill Oz O'fee
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Caution - love brings a health warning!

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Amatorculist



Do not be deceived

Whispers of a false lover

Will only bring pain


Copyright @ Phillozofee 2018

© 2018 Phill Oz O'fee


Author's Note

Phill Oz O'fee
Definition … ‘A little insignificant lover: a pretender to affection’

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yes, totally relatable! nice one. even few lines can affect a lot

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Phill Oz O'fee

5 Years Ago

Thank you my friend - a very kind review :-)
nice work, love the brevity and the images of the lamb and fox and yes love comes in many forms, for some just a taste.


Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Phill Oz O'fee

5 Years Ago

Yes - love can be either bitter or sweet - and - sometimes both - thanks for sharing your thoughts �.. read more
This is deep and so very true. But to love we have to take a chance, that they willn't do that. Love is a gamble. Like winning the lottery. Got to be in it to win it. lol

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Phill Oz O'fee

5 Years Ago

Thank you Dawn - your welcome review is worthy of contemplation - bless :-)
Reminds me of the period TV series that we watch, there is always false attention at the heart of every crisis it seems. Great piece!

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Phill Oz O'fee

5 Years Ago

Than you for your interesting comments - :-)
A fine poem that impresses with compact, subtle emotion. Advise all here; look at this !

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Phill Oz O'fee

5 Years Ago

Cheers Leslie - a kind review indeed :-)
If we don't give love a chance maybe we will never know..... :)
Its always better to be aware of whom you open up to and give your heart to.... reduces the bleeding of heart...

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Phill Oz O'fee

5 Years Ago

Thank you for reading and reviewing - to give love a chance is one thing - to find true love is anot.. read more
True true! We need to be wary of fakers!

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Phill Oz O'fee

5 Years Ago

Σας ευχαριστούμε, για την κριτική σας - :-)
LazerRays

5 Years Ago

Παρακαλώ!!!! :D

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Added on November 19, 2018
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Phill Oz O'fee
Phill Oz O'fee

Winchester, Hampshire, England, United Kingdom



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I am caught in a time spiral of confusion; that period we all experience between birth and death. Somewhere inside hides a poet, writer, lyricist and/or whatever, laying dormant and suppressed by s.. more..

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