A Christmas (acrostic)

Seasonal Greetings from Winchester (UK) ...

A Christmas (acrostic)

     Love Crafts fresh optimism

And the Hearts of many

      Will Ring out its goodness

Bringing Into a cold darkness

  A light So heavenly pure

That all Those who witness

      Are Moved to tears of joy

Sensing A peace so profound

    Each Soul shines more brightly

Copyright @ Phillozofee 2018

Reviews

[Louis McKraker]

Now this is super cool.
I've never seen acrostics done inward of the first letter of the first line.
Seems like it took a lot more brain work doing it this way.
Cheers! I always fiend for things I haven't see yet, and you satisfied that.


Thanks for that.

[m3lody mae]

Now this write is just amazing, I really enjoyed this write a lot. awesome

[Patricia Wedel]

Perhaps on Christmas morning we can see the brightest Light when the birth of a baby brings Hope to the world forevermore. Your poetry shines ever so brightly. truly, Pat

[Stella Armour]

I love this alternative acrostic , but not as much as i love the message within it ....a lovely poem Phil and just right for the season of goodwill. :)

[Julie McCarthy (juliesp..]

this is art and poetry at its best i loved it , truly.
i congratulate you on this one :)

[Louis McKraker]

Right as always, Julie.
merry Christmas to you and everyone.

[Kaycee]

This is absolutely phenomenal. I love the uniqueness and originality of this poem. Great writing.

[john l smith]

A very well crafted early entrance to the Xmas season
Dave

[Phill Oz O'fee]

Many thanks for your kind review John - :-)

[Lydia Shutter]

Such a soft and gentle write...nearly a prayer...for Christmas. A perfect acrostic for the holiday. I liked the way you had the letters for the word "Christmas" at the center of each line, not the first letter. Merry Christmas to you, Phill. Lydi**

[Phill Oz O'fee]

Season's blessings to you as well Lydia - thank you for your kind review … :-)

[lightsong]

beautifully glowing, sparkling, glittering as only a Christmas should be. warmth, kindness, comfort, peace and love are spreading from Your words to the whole world, and from the world to Winchester the most happiest seasonal greetings ever ✨🌟✨

[Phill Oz O'fee]

A lovely review my friend - thank you so much for sharing your thoughts on my write - :-)

[Kathy Van Kurin]

A Christmas (acrostic)
Phil Oz O'fee,
The beauty of Christmas is in it's meaning of hope...such warmth. It comes in the cold of winter with shorter days and less light.Jesus Christ taking away our pain and then being our wonder. The innocence of the Christ Child bringing true light and freedom. Your acrostic makes the points which bring a wonderful feeling of joy and hope to humanity. I say good job dear poet!
Blessings,
Kathy

[Phill Oz O'fee]

Wonderful message Kathy - so pleased you found my piece a homage to the season … bless you dear friend … :-)

[Kathy Van Kurin]

I wish you a beautiful time and a very merry Christmas filled with all the things which will warm your winter!
Kathy