A Christmas (acrostic)

A Christmas (acrostic)

A Poem by Phill Oz O'fee
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Seasonal Greetings from Winchester (UK) ...

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A Christmas (acrostic)



     Love Crafts fresh optimism

And the Hearts of many

      Will Ring out its goodness

Bringing Into a cold darkness

  A light So heavenly pure

That all Those who witness

      Are Moved to tears of joy

Sensing A peace so profound

    Each Soul shines more brightly


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Now this is super cool.
I've never seen acrostics done inward of the first letter of the first line.
Seems like it took a lot more brain work doing it this way.
Cheers! I always fiend for things I haven't see yet, and you satisfied that.


Thanks for that.

Posted 3 Months Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.




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Now this write is just amazing, I really enjoyed this write a lot. awesome

Posted 3 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Perhaps on Christmas morning we can see the brightest Light when the birth of a baby brings Hope to the world forevermore. Your poetry shines ever so brightly. truly, Pat

Posted 3 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I love this alternative acrostic , but not as much as i love the message within it ....a lovely poem Phil and just right for the season of goodwill. :)

Posted 3 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

this is art and poetry at its best i loved it , truly.
i congratulate you on this one :)

Posted 3 Months Ago


3 of 3 people found this review constructive.

Louis McKraker

3 Months Ago

Right as always, Julie.
merry Christmas to you and everyone.
Now this is super cool.
I've never seen acrostics done inward of the first letter of the first line.
Seems like it took a lot more brain work doing it this way.
Cheers! I always fiend for things I haven't see yet, and you satisfied that.


Thanks for that.

Posted 3 Months Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

This is absolutely phenomenal. I love the uniqueness and originality of this poem. Great writing.

Posted 3 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

A very well crafted early entrance to the Xmas season
Dave

Posted 3 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Phill Oz O'fee

3 Months Ago

Many thanks for your kind review John - :-)
Such a soft and gentle write...nearly a prayer...for Christmas. A perfect acrostic for the holiday. I liked the way you had the letters for the word "Christmas" at the center of each line, not the first letter. Merry Christmas to you, Phill. Lydi**

Posted 3 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Phill Oz O'fee

3 Months Ago

Season's blessings to you as well Lydia - thank you for your kind review … :-)
beautifully glowing, sparkling, glittering as only a Christmas should be. warmth, kindness, comfort, peace and love are spreading from Your words to the whole world, and from the world to Winchester the most happiest seasonal greetings ever ✨🌟✨

Posted 3 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Phill Oz O'fee

3 Months Ago

A lovely review my friend - thank you so much for sharing your thoughts on my write - :-)
A Christmas (acrostic)
Phil Oz O'fee,
The beauty of Christmas is in it's meaning of hope...such warmth. It comes in the cold of winter with shorter days and less light.Jesus Christ taking away our pain and then being our wonder. The innocence of the Christ Child bringing true light and freedom. Your acrostic makes the points which bring a wonderful feeling of joy and hope to humanity. I say good job dear poet!
Blessings,
Kathy


Posted 3 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Phill Oz O'fee

3 Months Ago

Wonderful message Kathy - so pleased you found my piece a homage to the season … bless you dear fr.. read more
Kathy Van Kurin

3 Months Ago

I wish you a beautiful time and a very merry Christmas filled with all the things which will warm yo.. read more

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Winchester, Hampshire, England, United Kingdom



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