This is one of your best short poems that I've read in a long time. You push word-crafting to the edge, such as your alliteration, but not over the edge. Same thing with your complex word choices, with just a few less tangled moments to give your lines a little room to breathe *smile* Fondly, Margie
This is one of your best short poems that I've read in a long time. You push word-crafting to the edge, such as your alliteration, but not over the edge. Same thing with your complex word choices, with just a few less tangled moments to give your lines a little room to breathe *smile* Fondly, Margie
I am caught in a time spiral of confusion; that period we all experience between birth and death.
Somewhere inside hides a poet, writer, lyricist and/or whatever, laying dormant and suppressed by s.. more..