Temptress Tease

Temptress Tease

A Poem by Phill Oz O'fee
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Sensational Poetess ...

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Temptress Tease



Mystic maiden muse

Enchantingly enticing

Pulsates pleasure points


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© 2018 Phill Oz O'fee


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This is one of your best short poems that I've read in a long time. You push word-crafting to the edge, such as your alliteration, but not over the edge. Same thing with your complex word choices, with just a few less tangled moments to give your lines a little room to breathe *smile* Fondly, Margie

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So which came first, the image or the poem?

Posted 5 Years Ago


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The picture used suits the words.
Mysterious

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

An alliteration delight wrapped in a sensual senryu..great stuff here..much enjoyed

Posted 5 Years Ago


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Short, sweet, alluring and mystical.

Posted 5 Years Ago


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And there you go, being an enticement !! Ha..
You always spark my senses..
Interesting, to say the least

Ha.... Jazzy

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is one of your best short poems that I've read in a long time. You push word-crafting to the edge, such as your alliteration, but not over the edge. Same thing with your complex word choices, with just a few less tangled moments to give your lines a little room to breathe *smile* Fondly, Margie

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Mmmm, an alliterate, sensuous senryu, and very lovely it is too... :)

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on December 3, 2018
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Phill Oz O'fee
Phill Oz O'fee

Winchester, Hampshire, England, United Kingdom



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