You Rock My Soul

You Rock My Soul

A Poem by Phill Oz O'fee
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Hot music....

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You Rock My Soul



Succulent strummed

Sensual songs

Bridge fiery

Upon these heartstrings


Scorching my bare

Ivory fretboard

With sultry sizzling

Fingers of love


Harmonic resonance

Stirs the spirit

From your lyrically

Composing whispers


And I am lost

Within acoustic rhythms

To frenzy dance

In steamy dreams of you


Upon blank manuscript

Your composition

Inlays beating chords

To ignite our passions


For as heavy euphony

Reaches shared crescendo

We are rocked alive

To our very essence


Copyright @ Phillozofee 2019

© 2019 Phill Oz O'fee


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There's nothing better than the feel of the guitar against the body, the touch of its living, breathing strings beneath the fingers! There's so much intensity, so much heat in this poem and the graphic is.. graphic

' Scorching my bare - Ivory fretboard - With sultry sizzling - Fingers of love ; That's what you call musica"

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Phill Oz O'fee

5 Years Ago

A crack of ice from pourin' out the bourbon - an' a hot riff always leaves ya smokin' .. Thank you m.. read more
emmajoy

5 Years Ago

Go for it, Phill.. that's how bad weather evenings should be spent!



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Such an exquisite blend of guitar licks & sinful tricks! Whenever I listen to Eric Clapton & his wailing lyrical guitar picking, it conjures up everything in your poem. It makes my writing come alive. It makes my cooking come alive. And if I had a love life, I'm pretty sure that would come alive, too! *wink! wink!* You do a great job of sprinkling guitar & musical words & ideas thru-out (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Nicely executed, this twist of music and love ans sex, so entwined in heart and mind

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

There's nothing better than the feel of the guitar against the body, the touch of its living, breathing strings beneath the fingers! There's so much intensity, so much heat in this poem and the graphic is.. graphic

' Scorching my bare - Ivory fretboard - With sultry sizzling - Fingers of love ; That's what you call musica"

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Phill Oz O'fee

5 Years Ago

A crack of ice from pourin' out the bourbon - an' a hot riff always leaves ya smokin' .. Thank you m.. read more
emmajoy

5 Years Ago

Go for it, Phill.. that's how bad weather evenings should be spent!
I hear SANTANA..
Thanks for taking....
me away..

Far Out..Way Cool !! ....

Jazzy

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Phill Oz O'fee

5 Years Ago

Rock on Jazzy - fantastic group with great sounds - thanks for your review... :-)
J. J.  Nightingale

5 Years Ago

You are welcome..... :)..................
Great image Phill. Those acoustic rhythms have hit the spot and sent you into a frenzy. They can do that can't they? And what a hot metaphor we have here as well for a romp in the bedroom. Nicely done.

Chris

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Phill Oz O'fee

5 Years Ago

Thank you Chris - no electric blanket required - bless you... :-)
Chris Shaw

5 Years Ago

Nope, body heat generated nicely :)

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Phill Oz O'fee
Phill Oz O'fee

Winchester, Hampshire, England, United Kingdom



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I am caught in a time spiral of confusion; that period we all experience between birth and death. Somewhere inside hides a poet, writer, lyricist and/or whatever, laying dormant and suppressed by s.. more..

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