First Arousal

A Poem by Phill Oz O'fee

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First Arousal

Fervent sensation

To that point of perception

When passions explode

© 2019 Phill Oz O'fee

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Chris Shaw

Wow. Phill, this is one hot senryu. Certainly raises the temperature reading it. Never ceases to amaze me the amount of passion you can get into so few syllables. Great image as well. Well done and have a great weekend.

Chris

Posted 5 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

5 Years Ago

Thank you Chris - you have a lovely weekend yourself... :-)

Annette Pisano-Higley

Yes, the image is so perfect to the content of this sensual Senryu. The sense of total ‘alive-ness’ and overwhelming emotion is so well-expressed here Phill. Whew! I must get a glass of iced sweet tea to help me cool down.... Hot!

Posted 5 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

5 Years Ago

Whoa - thanks Annette - what an effect my words have done to you - glad you liked... :-)

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Added on February 22, 2019
Last Updated on February 22, 2019

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Phill Oz O'fee

Winchester, Hampshire, England, United Kingdom

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