First Times

A reflection...

First Times

The first time

We saw each other

T ‘was like the morning sun

Shining down upon our souls of grey

 

The first time

We gently touched

Pulsation passions exploded

Into a constellation of mutual desires

 

The first time

We shared our candour

All vulnerabilities dissolved

As spirits synthesised into singularity

 

The first time

We pooled affections

Consuming all hours of darkness

We fell exhausted from our exhilarating

 

The first time

We watched the sunset

Contentment besieged senses

Tangled together in arms embraced

 

The first time

We spontaneously weep

Was reading that doctor’s note

Of just how little sharing time was left

 

The first time

We were disengaged

For life was no longer at my side

As I placed red roses upon an icy stone

 

The first time

We arched to just one

Left to hold just valued memories

And cling tightly onto previous first times

Copyright @ Phillozofee 2019

Reviews

[PandaPeaceful]

Brilliantly written. I especially adored the lines, "The first time/ We shared our candour/ All vulnerabilities dissolved"/ I find that the act of being vulnerable with someone is especially beautiful. It's so hard to be yourself, and let all feelings of pride go.
Lovely job!

[Terra]

Man, this cuts deep. Beautifully written.

[kentuck14]

This reminds me of an old Roberta Flack song . . . "The First Time I Ever Saw Your Face." Ahh . . . all the first times in a life together. Nice feel. Congratulations.
Tom

[Ardra]

Ah Phill....that's such sweetness Even in the distance... some love lasts even beyond death...wonderfully penned...:)

[jacob erin-cilberto]

and he will soon follow...when two love each other this much, they are inseparable.
even in death.
beautiful piece but oh so sad.
j.

[Phill Oz O'fee]

Thank you Jacob - your words are spot on … :-)

[Onlyme]

What a lovely romantic heartfelt and so beautiful sincere poem. Of affection, love and admiration for someone special.

[Phill Oz O'fee]

Many thanks for your lovely review Dawn - glad you liked my words... :-)

[Onlyme]

my pleasure Phill. You sure do have a lovely alluring way of expressing yourself with no smut or distaste. I truly loved it. :)

[Phill Oz O'fee]

:-) :-) :-) :-) :-)