Best Friend

Best Friend

A Poem by Phill Oz O'fee
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To all my Cafe' comrades ...

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Best Friend




Trustworthy obverse

Sharing passionate closeness

Of allied life force


Phillozofee @ 2008

 

© 2017 Phill Oz O'fee


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Oh yes, that's it. Nicely done! That's what we are, we have a special bond with words in mutual affection. -you English native speakers like Haikus and Senryus, here they aren't so popular. Interesting. On this way I want to thank you for your edition, what you sent me, I took something. _Anne did this for me, too. She edited, she is such a perfect editor for me, for I learn when she is making her suggestions - I know exactly what was wrong. Thanks Phill for that edition and - as always, a wonderful poem.

Posted 15 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.




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I absolutely love Haikus, especially when they are so beautifully expressed as in this poem.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Hiya! I must say that I absolutely enjoy your simple yet powerful statements. I recently took an indefinite break from a close friend and I wish she could read this piece of work! These are very true and powerful words.....peace, balance and harmony

Posted 13 Years Ago


Very well done haiku... Very visual.

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

You hit the nail on the head with this one. I like the lase line the best. It sums up each and every one of us.

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Great write- you really pick out the right words to say so much with very little

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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pal
A nice definition.. very brief one.

great.
pal

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Thank you kind sir!!

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

indeed those are the characteristics that we look for in a best friend... great insight -

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

You hit it on a best friend. I agree with this. You got it. Good job. Simple, but I love things that are to the point.

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Nice....to the point. Well done.

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Phill Oz O'fee
Phill Oz O'fee

Winchester, Hampshire, England, United Kingdom



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I am caught in a time spiral of confusion; that period we all experience between birth and death. Somewhere inside hides a poet, writer, lyricist and/or whatever, laying dormant and suppressed by s.. more..

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