Her Enlightening Relationship

Sharing thoughts and feelings

Her Enlightening Relationship

She rests upon chaise lounge

Stripped naked of worldly robes,

Escaping both the heat of day

And life’s unsatisfying goals.

 

Poignant polarity confusions

Subside inside her essence,

As night dreams of sensuality

Infuse a kindred presence.

 

With compassionate creativity

She sent both thoughts and feelings,

To an invisible secret partner

Who alone could grasp her meanings.

 

Erogenous non touch exchanges

In mutually heartfelt amelioration,

Bonded eager incisive spirits

To even grander imaginations.

 

Phillozofee 2008

Reviews

[Ladysue]

This is good writing..I am in awe of the depth and warmth of this piece...the last stanza in amazing...you have such brilliant lines in here...


She sent both thoughts and feelings,
To an invisible secret partner
Who alone could grasp her meanings.
Erogenous non touch exchanges

I loved this in all that it says...excellent work..

[Dani California]

Ah yes! To dream of the "one"... the fairy tale romance...the daydream...
calling on him through universal energy... the law of attraction...
beckoning... spirits

We do a lot of soulful exchanges here online as well.... which also brings
about invisible persons connecting through energies, consciousness, soul.... as opposed
to the physical realm.

This is an outstanding piece! Truly outstanding.

[Helen Woodward]

I'm convinced you have your own personal dictionary Phill, you know, the one you wrote!! This is a little different for you and I love to see writers come out of their comfort zone. This is a warm piece, having her long lost daydreams returned in ectsatic movement of thought, which you are so adept at doing. She is still beckoning the cosmos, but there is another being in her fantasy...a perfect partnership coupled with a little erotic action.
I loved it...
Elegant as always.
Helen :-)

[Gandré]

You wrote it exactly, how I think. Characteristic for her thinking is her reflexion to the world, she can see it holistically only and she is devoted to her temporal world the way, how it appears to her daily, it is the opposit to the spiritual world, and yes she is sending her thoughts and feelings only to one, the one who can understand her sophisticated view - she versed in the ways of her world. Isn't everything just consciousness?
wonderful, dear friend. thanks for posting this beauty for us.

[Gandré]

OMG Phillip
What a wonderful poem. I adore it. Will review when on PC this blackberry doesn t let me think words.
Much love. Later

[T]

Absolutely beautiful, Phill! I loved it! hugs

[Tina]

very powerful writing. you have beautifully portrayed the souls deepest inner desires.