Highspire

Sickly sweet

Ripened fruit

On the tip of

Your tongue 

Like 

Sulfur

Reviews

[Leigh]

Sweet as a cherry itself, formatted perfectly

[Simon Welsh]

Nice to have you back :) short and sweet.

[Ruth]

Ohh, awesomely expressive! Really like this :) x

[kublakhan27]

An intriguing image that brought many pictures and predicaments to mind...well done :)

[Inda]

Paints a great picture, i could almost taste it!

[J.L Hunter]

Very good use of this kind of poetry. Straight forward. Each line. Giving its own sort of emphasis. Especially that last word, kind of sums up the entirety. Thanks!

[gabrielle]

this is interesting. reminded me of our sweet promises that we never intend to fulfill.

[A. Amos]

Short and interesting, good write my friend