Glazed Eyes

A wind of freedom, just barely a breath
is captured within the daughter's lungs
being saved for a better cause
another life

The daughter's eyes are caught
by the subtle movements
of necessary life

The daughter's lungs will breathe
The daughter's eyes will dream
The daughter's heart will expire
The daughter's wish          
will be wished again

Reviews

[Fire Heart]

Nice Its amaazing...... i like it really good Pi

[Neon]

Nice poem... well crafted structure.. I enjoyed reading the poem. The title's cool. So much dreams you put into the Glazed eyes .. it's a fantasy write. The direction from left to right's cool .. it's easily caught by eyes to read. Theme's great. Lovely write, Keep on, Pi :)