Pull Strings My Love

Pull Strings My Love

A Poem by Daniel88Batson

I touch myself when I know you hurt,
Then beat myself black and blue
Until my blood bleeds a blistered yellow
And my backbone blindly claps for your sorry existence.


So cry me those prophetic tears,
Startle in your apathetic fears,
I’m dreaming of a world where you appease my sexual needs;
Show me how a real women feels.


Crawl your deplorable frame up those stairs,
Make me feel worthless and cheap,
Kill me in my beauty sleep.


I am the deity, you are my porcelain,
I am the martyr, you are my follower.


It’s arousing.
The endless power, that I,
Hold over your fickle skeleton.

© 2012 Daniel88Batson


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Daniel88Batson
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Abstract and nicely penned yet clearly understood.

Posted 11 Years Ago


This is yummy. The darkness in it, entices and yet leaves it open to the audiences' interpretation. The simple pleasures and pains of love all wrapped into one. Beautiful.

Posted 11 Years Ago


nice work. a great write. keep on writing. Please:)
-Chesney Chey(:

Posted 11 Years Ago


A dark poem that reflects upon the possessiveness in relationships. It has a mad and mercurial touch to it. It talks of fleeting emotions that are in a state of pendulum motions; there are moments where the person hurts himself when he hurts his love and moments where the person talks about owning her. A well written poem.

Posted 11 Years Ago



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Daniel88Batson
Daniel88Batson

Newquay, Cornwall, United Kingdom



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