Arctic Leaves

Majestic Meadows of dawn a view

Guest birds made a home upon steel

Swaying cold falls entwined hanging gardens

Pirouette floral hold turn out of stone

Sea moments lasting forever on a fall

In service As ever easiness make an attempt

Hazing will meaning the hours 

Lantern all else wound in perfection 

Promises engraving the life of memory

Magical incomplete pictures placed in molds

Fluffing in the background a story

Chances a little town of humane endurance

Festive dark beauty of love so pure

Oriental desolation flows in the soul

Fever persevering is the song  creating time

Choir still is the words being told

Mystery through whispers of dawn

Solitude living on quiet rivers

Clear voices greeting through scents

 

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

Beautiful photo and amazing words. The words took me in and I wanted to know more.
"Festive dark beauty of love so pure
Oriental desolation flows in the soul"
The above lines were my favorite. I enjoyed the complete poem. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

[Einstein Noodle]

your title is a pretty good hook ...especially since all eyes in the USA,at least, are anxiously awaiting the warm weather of Spring ..the pic is captivating!
lots of phrases and lines that are creative and draw sharp contrasts that conflict or hints of a deeper calm and meaning .. the risk we run using spontaneous word associations is the loss of syntax .. tho the couplet form you chose gives some solidity overall i think the reader's understanding suffers ... and i love this kind of poetry .. this one has definitely stretched the limits ..your closing leaves me with a sense of "arriving" ... of resolution ... i think you have said all you wanted to ... so well done says i! ;)
E.

[EcstaticEuphoria]

Beautiful... really love how different this is and how unique. Please keep sharing💟

[John Alexander McFadyen]

There are indeed some gems in here, sparkling frosted phrases intertwined with mystery that only the beholder may see clearly.

[B]

Thank you John. That's sweet

[Moonlight]

This is so beautiful. Both the image your piece potrays as well as the way you have worded it. And the image you have put in the beginning of the dancer just adds to its elegance.
I loved reading it.

[B]

Thank you for your kind words of support

[Moonlight]

You're most welcome :)

[wordman]

you painted such a beautiful image with your words,creative and well penned

[B]

Thank you wordman :)

[wordman]

my pleasure

[MsJewel]

A very thought provoking and creative poem. I love it and the art you chose to accompany your well written words :) Julie

[B]

Thanks Julie I was being artisy

[Isabella Ivy]

My goal is to reach a point of this type of freedom in my poetry, and yet I feel there needs to be more clarity here. 'Hazing will meaning the hours' sounds incorrect to me, or I may just be confused by it. Still, I think you are on track for painting a scene, using words, to cause understanding or enjoyment to rise in your reader by visiting the place you created :) I.I.

[B]

Thank you
Will can be Hazey and unclear and it attacks time .... takes away hours .... thanks for your review

[Isabella Ivy]

I see :) And you are very welcome!

[JessyJacob]

There is no boundary in a restricted heart, who is bounded, neither God is bounded. Nobody restricts anybody's freedom, every man is free on this earth, came freely ,and leaves freely too.

[JessyJacob]

Yes I want to add my personal experience, maybe it looks little odd over here to tell this, but it sounds similar, A person who has habbit of digging more, he just goes on digging, even my father, my mom thought let him be given room full of bottles then he gets rid of drinking habit, but to my experience, i already know that, he will never get rid of drinking habit. Similar habits which come in middle may last longer, you never know he may stop, maynot stop, Only the person and situations had to decide. But I never I tried to restrict anybody's freedom, I wanted to give full freedom, where he enjoys only one, dont missunderstand me, with other polluting thoughts.

[Jes' Pi]

I loved this poem..and the image is lovely too..

[B]

Thank you for reading and reviewing

[andrew mitchell]

I felt the cold embrace of this poem, icy overtones!!

[andrew mitchell]

I felt isolated and alone!

[B]

lol
If you feel like writing i could write with you
i am very much in a mood right now