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Arctic Leaves

Arctic Leaves

A Poem by Lingering Soul

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Majestic Meadows of dawn a view
Guest birds made a home upon steel

Swaying cold falls entwined hanging gardens
Pirouette floral hold turn out of stone

Sea moments lasting forever on a fall
In service As ever easiness make an attempt

Hazing will meaning the hours 
Lantern all else wound in perfection 

Promises engraving the life of memory
Magical incomplete pictures placed in molds

Fluffing in the background a story
Chances a little town of humane endurance

Festive dark beauty of love so pure
Oriental desolation flows in the soul

Fever persevering is the song  creating time
Choir still is the words being told

Mystery through whispers of dawn
Solitude living on quiet rivers

Clear voices greeting through scents
 

© 2017 Lingering Soul



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Beautiful photo and amazing words. The words took me in and I wanted to know more.
"Festive dark beauty of love so pure
Oriental desolation flows in the soul"
The above lines were my favorite. I enjoyed the complete poem. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

Posted 6 Months Ago


your title is a pretty good hook ...especially since all eyes in the USA,at least, are anxiously awaiting the warm weather of Spring ..the pic is captivating!
lots of phrases and lines that are creative and draw sharp contrasts that conflict or hints of a deeper calm and meaning .. the risk we run using spontaneous word associations is the loss of syntax .. tho the couplet form you chose gives some solidity overall i think the reader's understanding suffers ... and i love this kind of poetry .. this one has definitely stretched the limits ..your closing leaves me with a sense of "arriving" ... of resolution ... i think you have said all you wanted to ... so well done says i! ;)
E.

Posted 1 Year Ago


Beautiful... really love how different this is and how unique. Please keep sharing💟

Posted 1 Year Ago


There are indeed some gems in here, sparkling frosted phrases intertwined with mystery that only the beholder may see clearly.

Posted 1 Year Ago


Lingering Soul

1 Year Ago

Thank you John. That's sweet
This is so beautiful. Both the image your piece potrays as well as the way you have worded it. And the image you have put in the beginning of the dancer just adds to its elegance.
I loved reading it.

Posted 1 Year Ago


Lingering Soul

1 Year Ago

Thank you for your kind words of support
Moonlight

1 Year Ago

You're most welcome :)
you painted such a beautiful image with your words,creative and well penned

Posted 1 Year Ago


Lingering Soul

1 Year Ago

Thank you wordman :)
 wordman

1 Year Ago

my pleasure
A very thought provoking and creative poem. I love it and the art you chose to accompany your well written words :) Julie

Posted 1 Year Ago


Lingering Soul

1 Year Ago

Thanks Julie I was being artisy
My goal is to reach a point of this type of freedom in my poetry, and yet I feel there needs to be more clarity here. 'Hazing will meaning the hours' sounds incorrect to me, or I may just be confused by it. Still, I think you are on track for painting a scene, using words, to cause understanding or enjoyment to rise in your reader by visiting the place you created :) I.I.

Posted 1 Year Ago


Isabella Ivy

1 Year Ago

I see :) And you are very welcome!
jessy

1 Year Ago

There is no boundary in a restricted heart, who is bounded, neither God is bounded. Nobody restricts.. read more
jessy

1 Year Ago

Yes I want to add my personal experience, maybe it looks little odd over here to tell this, but it .. read more
I loved this poem..and the image is lovely too..

Posted 1 Year Ago


Lingering Soul

1 Year Ago

Thank you for reading and reviewing
I felt the cold embrace of this poem, icy overtones!!

Posted 1 Year Ago


andrew mitchell

1 Year Ago

I felt isolated and alone!
Lingering Soul

1 Year Ago

lol
If you feel like writing i could write with you
i am very much in a mood right now.. read more

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