Tree Enclosure

Despite their differences

Holding arms of twig through night

Breathing in toxins

Giving out life

Through Darker corners

All in all they lay the same

Extinguished life slowly decays

Rebirth of an ecosystem in dirt

Bright orange through a fall

Darkest browns through the cold

Coated in glitter on wedding nights

Shimmering shadows holding stories

The picnic you had

A first kiss in twilight

Unlike those who sight

Oak bark settles no debt

Never has been any due

Admiring the shades of red within

Embracing green flutter to common ground

They say humans are superior

Only mother nature is truly wise 

Eternal resemblance of beauty

Throughout history and time

Back to life

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

I agree. Trees are beautiful. I saw many great forest and I saw the tropics. Nature's gift to the wise in vision. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

[B]

I wrote most of these pieces being outdoors
It was quite an experience
Thank you

[Coyote Poetry]

I love the sea, lakes and the forest. Perfect place to know peace. And you are welcome.

[EcstaticEuphoria]

Truly a beautiful piece! Verbal and visual... Thanks for sharing with us!

[B]

Thank you R

[JT Godin]

I like the dichotomy of images present in each couplet. I'm reminded of The Waste Land's first line.

[B]

Thank you Thomas :)

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Excellent use of metaphor again in a descriptive piece full of vibrance and gentle colours.

[B]

Thank you John

[wordman]

you brought nature to life,you have shown it`s beautiful colors,and the magic of night

[B]

Thank you wordman :)

[wordman]

you`re welcome

[Paul Bell]

Just wish those superior humans would give mother nature a break. Especially when they rip out vast forests.

[B]

I know
And i wish people cared more about poverty .... and displacements ... its not fair

[Paul Bell]

Something tells me that won't change ever.

[Tina H.W.]

I like the way you see the world around you, SoloSolace. This is incredible :)

[B]

Thank you Tina :)

[G.C.... aka Gene]

Never has there any been due.
... Suggest moving Been after Has. Will read more natural and the stars will still remain. .
Enjoy your art highlights. By the way thanks for visiting my poetry.

[B]

will do the correction
Thank you GC

[Mr.Writer]

Amazing job!!! This was amazing!
"The picnic you had
A first kiss in twilight"
These were my favourite lines!! Sooo good!
Keep it up!

[B]

Thank you Mr. Writer
i wonder what is your name

[Mr.Writer]

No problem! My name is Shaan

[B]

Hello shaan .....

[Mr.Writer]

Hii :) Wassup

[Farhan Shaikh]

Very well conveyed, very well written all the stuffs in this poem is really good..
Loved the poem from its beginning to the bottom

[B]

Thank you Farhan