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The Calm

The Calm

A Poem by Lingering Soul
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I love you so much .... Smile it off

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When raging winds roar
Upon a million starry shores

After the solemn pair drifts away
Touching sands of white all remains

Through her soft hair the rhythm goes
A place of no drugs floats through

While a seeing eye presumes too much
Some calm seems to visit this temple

A soul accepting tears of the sun
Relaying the paradise of this mind

Another way to life mediates the tide
To welcome all the ravishing fruit

Kind in it's giving color it may fly
Holding a prayer for mercy upon his soul

A coconut recline in his beautiful eyes
Kissing away the tears to a Tahiti

She is the summering hour taking a stroll
Left if the egoistic tick of time 

Beyond the strings of wooden oak 
Behind the fluttering toes sand dilates 

Away you go into her peace
Calming the tame of regular sight  

© 2017 Lingering Soul



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NICE THANKS FOR SHARING YOU TALENTS.

Posted 1 Month Ago


Lingering Soul

1 Month Ago

Thank you 😊
"She is the summering hour taking a stroll
Left if the egoistic tick of time...." this line and the image drove it home for me. i love this

Posted 3 Months Ago


Lingering Soul

3 Months Ago

Thank you Dear Sonnie
meditative, mystical and serene in the reading ... you know how i enjoy this style of yours ..especially like the pairing of wind, stars and tides .. and "A coconut recline in his beautiful eyes" is delightful ... another keeper my friend!
E.

Posted 6 Months Ago


Lingering Soul

6 Months Ago

Thank you E
Again, positive message, and positive direction.

Posted 6 Months Ago


Lingering Soul

6 Months Ago

Thank you so much
Very beautiful and calm. After reading i feel so happy. Well done.

Posted 6 Months Ago


Lingering Soul

6 Months Ago

Thank you so much
WRITER-----------TYPEWRITER

6 Months Ago

You wellcome . I realy like it.
I do believe my toes have sand between them, and I desperately thirst for a drink with an umbrella in it! A most lovely repose, destined to transport the calmest of muses!

Posted 6 Months Ago


Lingering Soul

6 Months Ago

Thank you so much Kelly .... blushing here
Kelly Scheppers

6 Months Ago

I love the euphoric joy of your avatar - balloons and the beach, what a thrill!
Lingering Soul

6 Months Ago

Thank you so much
this definitely had a south pacific island feel captured nicely through verse and the photo helps.

Posted 6 Months Ago


Lingering Soul

6 Months Ago

I went to Australia yesterday for half an hour
Tried to imagine how it would feel to be there.. read more
andrew mitchell

6 Months Ago

30 minutes to see australia
Lingering Soul

6 Months Ago

lol ... and who said we need planes lol
a touching write,really enjoyed

Posted 6 Months Ago


Lingering Soul

6 Months Ago

Thanks Wordman
I really love this poem. It is relaxing to me just to read it as I think what turmoil I feel in my live at times and seeing the peace you have in this writing brings me piece in return.

Well Done.

Posted 6 Months Ago


Lingering Soul

6 Months Ago

Thanks HL ............
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Oh I love this one very much it's peaceful and soothing. I even enjoyed the description at the start lol

Posted 6 Months Ago



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