Moment

We will whisper words 

Into each other's ears

One day

While creating the idea of love

When i see you 

Words come to visit

Along with endless song

Humming the tune of you

I look at you as you talk

My heart flutters in pure joy

I finally saw heaven on earth

As you look up

I look down

You are the perfect melody

Flying upon my poor torn heart

All those shattered pieces

Come off the ground 

Gathering space in my chest

Picking up pace 

I can't breathe 

I never felt this full before

The world was never this perfect place

Until this moment 

Something meant to be framed

The entire world should stop

Taking witness of this beautiful god creation

Talking, walking this morning

Butterflies fill this field 

As my head gets dizzy

All i hear is your voice

Through music and child's play

Heaven descended to this earth

As an angel formed

You are all i want

All i ever dreamed of

The world is not big enough

To carry this moment 

The things we exchange in total silence

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

I liked the words and thoughts.
"All i ever dreamed of
The world is not big enough
To carry this moment
The things we exchange in total silence"
The above lines. Very good and you left the reader with something to think about. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[B]

Thank you C
That's very nice of you

[Coyote Poetry]

Was my pleasure and you are welcome my friend.

[witchofthisage]

it's so pure. a moment of sheer love stretched out in the verses. a fleeting while made perpetual in strings of words.

[B]

Thank you for your kind words

[Mystery]

Such beautiful structure it's enlightening, you're choice of words demonstrates a need for a since of ease due to the sense of affection that doesn't last.

[B]

It lasts more than i thought it be
Thank you Mystery

[Anna Moore]

A wonderful description of the delicate robustness of strong emotional bonds being created.

[B]

Thank you Anna

[TheOne&Only]

This was so beautiful! I could feel the words flow within me, ...

[B]

Well thank you :)

[Einstein Noodle]

well depicted my friend! i remember the exact moment when all the love songs ever written finally made sense to me...i treasure it in memory ...not for the outcome ..but for the revelation ...and we remain friends to this day ;)) you have created such a moment through your poem ...pleasant to just sit here and relax in it
E.

[B]

Thank you so much E

[Farhan Shaikh]

Lovely piece of writing, well penned

[B]

Thank you Farhan

[KWP]

it's a lovely piece, well done. Myself I am not into the gushy words, but you have mastered them well X

[B]

I am all gush lol
Thank you KWP

[WillaDanvers]

This is a beautiful piece of work. I thoroughly enjoyed reading it and the imagery is very clear. :) Great job!

[B]

Thank you
i am humbled by your words

[EcstaticEuphoria]

Beautiful. I love the awakening of the soul... once thought to be broken, even dead, revived and rejuvenated. Made to remember humanity in ways never before revealed.
"I can't breathe
I never felt this full before"

Love this piece, very real. Thanks for sharing!

[B]

Thank you so much
:)