Ezra's Dust

Painting is not mine .... i wish !!

We have only use of how this glass 

can lace out days away

here avenue was off

full through run on tongues 

Reviews

[andrew mitchell]

profound write on something like this image to talk about.

[B]

Thank you Andrew

[Ruth]

Awesome free form and metaphor, I love this. Really gives me something to think deeply on :)

[B]

Thank you Poppy ....

[EcstaticEuphoria]

Short, yet entreating... thank you for sharing!

[B]

Thank you Rosalee .... i love your name

[JT Godin]

I like the title.

Also, content wise, thought provoking and short.

[B]

Thank you Thomas
gonna be visiting your work soon :)

[ms. barrie]

i cannot help but echo everyone else's sentiments, this is very abstract indeed.

i enjoy the unique cleverness
you've incorporated into this write. thank you for sharing- x

[B]

Thank you Ms. Barrie

[Farhan Shaikh]

Very good abstract of the poem..good one

[B]

Thank you Farhan

[Arjun Singh]

I think these 4 lines were laid out rather cleverly..
They get you thinking..., Imagining and Fantasizing!!
(P.S: The painting carried the same 'enigmatic' vibe for me...is it something you made..?)

[B]

No the painting is not mine
words are

thank you

[wordman]

only in the beholder of the reader,it has many faces

[B]

Thank you wordman

[mercy party]

there is nothing better than standing in front of a painting and making up your own mind about it. A good abstract poem will allow a reader the same experience. This was sublime! :)

[B]

Thank you so much

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Some afternoon mood. Throught the sunday window. Feel like slowly swing , and you are somehow happy.

[B]

lol
thank you :)

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You wellcome . It s very nice