His

Upon the whirlpools of transcending knowledge

The moon there stood within entwined times

Refining the rendered landscape 

Of all the shooting stars of shadowy hope

The galaxy daisy spread accross flute sound

Dreamboat set to visit this valley

The moment of peace floating through

Leaving so much to learn without speech

A harmonious pride of righteous space

Having known the rushing clue within blue 

Gardens recreated longing to grow

Voiceless promises of care resonnates

A white rose stood in placement 

Kneeling to the shinning sun found

Credentials written on running waters

Touched by the innocence of a voice

Upon the rays of awakened literature

The scent of your presence

Water ways found roots to love

A place for it's givings to be received 

Cream white semblance within your arms

Questioning if you had found me

Or was it me searching for you

Sprouting the edge of life in finer air

Exchanging greenery for golden braces

If the light shall fall through us just the same

This island universe of yours

You would remain within for another year

A reasoning emotion building the stars 

Building a port to the heavens

We would recite the letters of a bird

Floating a white rose on an ocean of reality

A protroyal of your deep longing 

Waving the flutter butterfly's wing 

Yielding another day in toned earth 

Delaying our sense for joy

She would kiss your eyes as she closed her palms

The hideaway

For the pond sits just below

A white rose

Reviews

[Amy R]

Beautiful poem, I love this piece a lot.
thanks for sharing!!

[B]

Thank you Amy

[Amy R]

my pleasure

[Chase Dylan]

Your word choice, meter, succinct portrayal of fine lines with heavenly rhymes... Heh... I just really love your writing, and this was no exception... The letters of a bird hidden away in white snow... Like a rose... Superbly penned...

[B]

Thank you Silente

[andrew mitchell]

enchanting enchanting enchanting, reads like a beautiful fairytale.

[B]

Thank you Thank you Thank you

[andrew mitchell]

my pleasure, pleasure, pleasure.

[Island Hippy]

Aloha, gorgeous poetry. I love the image of a rose kneeling to the sun. Like hearts leaning into each other. Love really does grow like that. Izzy

[B]

It does indeed
thank you so much
i love your pic ..... you are so beautiful

[Island Hippy]

Oh :) Mahalo that's kind of you to say

[jacob erin-cilberto]

regardless of who started out searching, two hearts meant to be together, grow toward each other, find the same garden eventually, and find themselves intertwined in the garden of love.

[B]

ooh my
thank you Jacob

[Coyote Poetry]

A amazing poem written. I like the places and the thoughts in the words. Life, beauty and places are gathered for us to know. Life is okay. I enjoyed the complete poem. Thank you for sharing the outstanding poetry.
Coyote

[B]

Thank you C

[Coyote Poetry]

This is poetry my friend and you are welcome.

[wordman]

love all the metaphors,you painted a lovely image

[B]

Thank you Wordman

[Mr.Writer]

Beautifully described!! I was hooked into the poem...
"For the pond sits just below
A white rose"
So delicate and crisp lines...
Keep it up!

[B]

Thank you Monsieur

[Mr.Writer]

No problem :)

[B]

Lol
I see

[Mr.Writer]

Hmm, what do you mean lol