A Poem by Lookatthestars

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One explusion a source of innate truth
Souls spread accross auric Himalayan salt

Releasing invalidation which is of no need
Levatating to all that once was monumental 

Capturing shades of umbrage existence 
As a stare through elucidations

Above augmentings of speech
A solace diffusion of inner thought

Revisiting timed words in gradient darkness
Seeking existence by nautical hold 

Running by the Moroccan valley of drizzled rains
Leaving a mortalized footstep to mark time

Departing a haven donating open palms
A Hawaiian wave of meditative acts 

Placed penitent condolences 
Wars reliquishing weapons of strife

A chant of supplicatory worded life 
As fame broke fortune somewhere lies bliss

The pusuit is all left untamed
The overpass refuted with soul

The faces of caligraphy rendering statues of faith
To exist ethically within an endless opera of light

Instrumently striking a note through eyes 
Risen within an undulated world 

As age races to difficulty with barren intention
Susurration in shadowy love

Residence within revery rise
Unaffected by violence remaining righteous

Never to trick an espy of a stranger 
Through the impeccant Alpine river 

The quiescent thirst a fervent quiver
Upon the valley of flower

Of learnt opaque spiritual reference
To live by tenacious truthful exigency 

Croon chanting through geriatic arabic
Florid henna in woven formless silk 

Cobalt escaping mirage of a dream

© 2017 Lookatthestars

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as much as i see things how they should be i will never see peace in the middle east.sadly. a nice write, a gem!!!

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1 Day Ago

There is no peace in the world
only in heaven
Thank you Andrew

1 Day Ago

But Saudi Embraced Mr. Trump something i thought no one could do
So maybe things will get bet.. read more
The magnificent and holy sapphire, in all its celestial hues, is a stone of wisdom and royalty, of prophecy and divine favour. It is forever associated with sacred things and considered the gem of gems, a jewel steeped in the history and lore of nearly every religion. Your creative linkage of word structure produces sutile stimulants of the mind as th read progresses. Excellent compostion ... PS I new a girl called Sapphire – this piece reminded me of her character. Respect ...

Posted 6 Days Ago


5 Days Ago

Thank you Phil
I am glad i could remind you of someone you like
Wow.. It really felt like a word mirage to me.. An oasis in the desert. Something that I can appreciate from far but an untouchable existence.. Spiritual and soulful 😊👍

Posted 6 Days Ago


6 Days Ago

Thank you
thats exactly what i wanted to place


thank you
Holy mother of wow... This... Wow wow wow wow wow wow... Can I please give this 1000 points...?!?! You not only broadened my vocabulary with this stupendous poetic ride... You frazzled my senses with syllable loops, gorgeous detail, and some of the most sensational word choice I have ever seen in such writing... This is beyond skilled... Masterfully penned... But no seriously... I have learned some things here...

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6 Days Ago

thank you
humbled by your review
thank you

6 Days Ago

Nono, well... Yesyes, but seriously... THANK YOU... Thank you for writing this... I do not often lea.. read more

6 Days Ago

Thank you :)

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4 Reviews
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Added on May 17, 2017
Last Updated on May 19, 2017
Tags: spiritual, dreams, inner, strength, love, unspoken, scriptures, secrets, universe

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