Fragrant Memory

Such impressions of the soul once found

Cheerful tides of some form of blessings 

 

Tears of joy would pile onto a sky

Of streaming colors a tuneful blue

 

The essence of a fragrant heaven would hold

If by dismay sight would catch this glimpse

 

All that would resound is the endless stream

Of all senses that never could end

 

Apart by the revering bank this song would remain

Tied by the proximity of a nearby rainbow

 

As bowlful prayers would evaporate through waters to care

A cave was to be discovered within a smile 

 

The genius of time that seizes to break

Like a light floating particle of air

 

A much needed place of imagination would find seed

The form of beauty seldom seen through day

 

The magnificence of the days passing by

As gentle winter steps would create a timeless footprint

 

Hunting for daring forms of sight

Eager to make the scene fragrant with memory 

Reviews

[Done]

Your words are magical. These words do not even do yours justice other than a simple little "wow".

[B]

lol
Well thank you lol

[andrew mitchell]

You do nice poems so well, I find they are hard to write hence mine are more dark, depressing, and morbid, they are easy to write lol

[B]

lol
they are not yours are funny

[Cassie]

Wow!!! This is so so beautiful

[B]

Thank you Cassie

[Julie McCarthy (juliesp..]

Exquisite
Bountiful
Beautiful
Expressive

[B]

Thank you dear Julie

[.]

A very lush, visual piece of writing.

Like strolling through the Garden of Eden; taking in all the sights, sounds and smells and storing them in a safe place in the soul as treasured finite moments.

A very lovingly written piece.

[B]

Thank you Doodley :)

[.]

Sure, Winston!

[B]

lol
not winston :P

[.]

Okay. Schmidt then! :p

[B]

no ................
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[Writer at last! Sky ~]

Eager to make the scene fragrant with memory. Yes, we always keep painting beautiful fragments of memory in our mind. Such a beautiful painting on the canvas of memory with your words. Amazing one!

[B]

Thank You Sky !!

[Writer at last! Sky ~]

Welcome!!!!!!

[Paul Bell]

This could be a nice walk through the gardens, surrounded by new life. But the walk seems of remembrance and what could have been.

[B]

Thank you Paul

[Weeping willow]

Great write,enjoyed the flowing images throughout the poem.

[B]

Thank you so much WW

[An owl on the moon]

How I loved the image filled with vibrant colors, and your words flow with such a beautiful essence of what was, the lingering scent of petals and scenes of life. They say our sense of smell is rooted in the deepest places of our memories.

[B]

Thank you so much for your support

[An owl on the moon]

Thankful you're here with us.

[writ rajat]

Wow very nice to read this really enjoyed your poem will recite in my home

[B]

Well thank you Writ