Of all that is

Of all that is

A Poem by Lingering Soul
"

Never let things pass you by

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Delve into this contented ocean of silver words

Speak of all that is prosperous for it was and would be

 

Sink into released forms of loving this life

For my introverted heart spoke of this golden path

 

We would engrave tenacious happiness 

Often placid sand would wonder so volatile 

 

Living between those secluded groves  

Sentimental promises of primitive waves

 

Piled upon the dark sidewalk of this heart

Park yourself a pleasant thought within reality

 

For the beauty of this gifted morning air

Would seldom wait for any form of obscured passion

 

Dreams would resolutely part phobic with timid tides

Soaking the breaking point of inducted solitude

 

We drown within shadows of beauty fleeing 

Of all the plans wilting in rosy water

 

Life calls out upon the abided blue docks

As consumed pigeons would deliver lost letters

 

Proclaiming it really is the opportune time

Trains of reality placed by this serendipitous foaming bay


© 2017 Lingering Soul



Author's Note

Lingering Soul
Sometimes one can't wait
and should go for what they want .......

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that was very good, it was very creative and sent a powerful message!!!!

Posted 2 Days Ago


Lingering Soul

2 Days Ago

Thank you Justin
Cute dog
Justin

2 Days Ago

your welcome, if u get time, please look at my writing, I wish it is my dog lol, thanks :) :) :)
Excellent thought provoking writing. For me a lovely celebration of the present moment and of clear seeing where reality and dreams can meet together and eben embrace each other. A lovely well chosen image, great work.

Posted 1 Week Ago


Lingering Soul

2 Days Ago

Thank you so much
George Coombs

2 Days Ago

Your welcome
Your words dance so tenderly between the forms of reality and the wonders of dreams, awakening a world where both collide. May we all find these stirring moments of the soul where we are fully alive in the moment of every breath. Beautifully voiced.

Posted 2 Months Ago


Lingering Soul

1 Month Ago

Thank you so much
Beautiful! Never miss an opportunity. Beautifully penned piece! Keep em flowing

Posted 2 Months Ago


Lingering Soul

1 Month Ago

Thank you dear
I love the flow of this piece. Love how you use works that make it come alive.

Posted 2 Months Ago


Lingering Soul

2 Months Ago

Thank you so much
"For my introverted heart spoke of this golden path". This verse made me realise that writing is the golden path for you. Keep writing and sharing your amazing work to the world. :)

~Lyla

Posted 2 Months Ago


Lingering Soul

2 Months Ago

I am very humbled by your kindness
Thank you so much
Beautiful artwork and wonderful use of words. I liked how you use the description. You mad the reader feel and understand the words. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

Posted 2 Months Ago


Lingering Soul

2 Months Ago

Thank you Coyote :)
Coyote Poetry

2 Months Ago

You are welcome.
Grasping the moment in time and space in a poetic interpretation of ‘passion’ embraced – exquisite! :-)

Posted 2 Months Ago


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Lingering Soul

2 Months Ago

Thank you so much Phil
Lovely!
I really like the title too.
Keep writing! x

Posted 2 Months Ago


Lingering Soul

2 Months Ago

Thank you very much
sound advise,but sometimes it`s just not the right time to chase your dreams

Posted 2 Months Ago


Lingering Soul

2 Months Ago

Its always time
Thank you Wordman

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Added on July 24, 2017
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