Prolepsis Red

Prolepsis Red

A Poem by Lingering Soul
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Love waits for you .....

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Evaded Teachings by the darkest ray

Dipping into the savage ink

 

Soft fingers touch the lustrous air

Euphoria Courting birthed out of time

 

As scampering terror fleets forgotten minds

Never minding intentioned trouble piling wings

 

Discovered are instances of sententious forms of you

The dizzying supple effect of imploded rains

 

As she smoothly turned all that you hate

An archaic work of art teals of thread

 

The thin insinuations of translations left to dissipate

Affinities made to pull at your bedside

 

Arriving in hasty satin of the deepest red

Enclosed by a gentle unwavering kiss it rests

 

Yielding ruffles of consecrated seas 

As everything invisible thought to be dead

Came to life aroused in the deepest red

 



© 2017 Lingering Soul



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Red rose.....red words.....red.....the colour of love.

Reads like the rebirthing of love after a period of lying dormant. Not sure if true prolepsis, as you have symbolised it waits, however. One can stumble upon it or chase it, but to sit and wait for it to arrive is not the ideal. Time and opportunity is lost. Carpe Diem should be the motto.

I liked the poem with the format on the page suiting the theme. Nice work.

Posted 1 Month Ago


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Doodley

1 Month Ago

My name is not Buddy!
a beautiful touching write

Posted 1 Month Ago


Lingering Soul

1 Month Ago

Thank you WM
 wordman

1 Month Ago

my pleasure,,ron
Poetic symbolisation of anticipations as existing, before the actual event occurs! Love the format, font selection and the font colour – all adds to the creative effect of the subject matter! Very neatly penned …

Posted 3 Months Ago


Lingering Soul

3 Months Ago

Thanks phill
Wow. This is like throwing a pebble into a still pond.
Watching the ripples flow wider and wider.
A journey of wonderment come to life .
Did the kiss awake her. I wonder.

Posted 4 Months Ago


Lingering Soul

4 Months Ago

They do and will
Because one of them
For once
Saw things right
Paul Bell

4 Months Ago

All's well that ends well.
Lingering Soul

4 Months Ago

No end exists for those who see only new beginnings
What a brilliant blending of tenderness and wildness. There is an awakening of thoughts, of life coming into focus, arising in the beautiful red hue of the world. The movement of existence, so powerful.

Posted 4 Months Ago


Lingering Soul

4 Months Ago

Thank you so much
I have been awakened indeed
An owl on the moon

4 Months Ago

So happy to know of your joyful awakening.
i like the smoothness...and i like the soft images that interact with the rough ones, to soften the edge.

j.

Posted 4 Months Ago


Lingering Soul

4 Months Ago

Thank you so much J
Evocative words, building up to 'As everything invisible thought to be dead, came to life aroused in the deepest red.' Beautifully put.

Posted 4 Months Ago


Lingering Soul

4 Months Ago

Thank you so much for your kind words
Amazing work, making one sigh from the beauty and subtle intent. The ''thin insinuations of translations'' is pure class :)

Posted 4 Months Ago


Lingering Soul

4 Months Ago

Thank you Ana
Had to google prolepsis.....;)

Beautiful poetry.....do you know the acronym KISS? :)

Posted 4 Months Ago


Lingering Soul

4 Months Ago

Thank you SV

Evaded Teachings by the darkest ray
Dipping into the savage ink

Soft fingers touch the lustrous air
Euphoria Courting birthed out of time

As scampering terror fleets forgotten minds
Never minding intentioned trouble piling wings

Discovered are instances of sententious forms of you
The dizzying supple effect of imploded rains

As she smoothly turned all that you hate
An archaic work of art teals of thread

The thin insinuations of translations left to dissipate
Affinities made to pull at your bedside

Arriving in hasty satin of the deepest red
Enclosed by a gentle unwavering kiss it rests

Yielding ruffles of consecrated seas
As everything invisible thought to be dead
Came to life aroused in the deepest red

i loved it but i find it hard to read.
Keep writing. only suggestion is to increase your font size.

Posted 4 Months Ago


Lingering Soul

4 Months Ago

I don't know
I actually love it
But Thanks for your comment :)

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