Eternal Drawings

A simple need embracing the road

Of gentle steps claimed to time

A ballroom of eternal art would remain

Goodness is this place we made

Workings of a happy mind it sits

So you move into another reality

Across the soft touchings of a play

Roman like empires dress your golden hair

Leaves would slowly fall onto a chair

We find no method of departure

Creating a new meaning of eternal drawings

A love that made a life rolling into space

Reviews

[Einstein Noodle]

fifth couplet is a gentle turn with purpose .. to a beautiful hope in your closing ... love how you have used the language ... every line unique and adds to my feeling of bliss ... i think your poem not only reflects a wondrous love but underlying it is a commitment to work to make it so ... beautiful beautiful beautiful love poem ... and Valentine's Day is fast approaching ..;)
E.

[B]

I know
I must say i think i am looking forward to this one
Thanks E.

[andrew mitchell]

Your flow of words is like a breeze. Nice work.

[B]

Thanks Andrew
How are you

[andrew mitchell]

Not too bad , how are you old friend.

[B]

i am doing really well
been so swamped with work
how is aussie

[jacob erin-cilberto]

a road in fall...a love we embrace hand in hand...i had a sister golden hair once...we were so inseparable one would call her my sister...yet she was the love of my life through fall...and then winter happened...and there was her method of departure...and me facing a new spring alone.

you draw pictures with your words, and your syllables color in between the lines..."a ballroom of eternal art."

[Nisreen]

Thank you dear Jacob

[SleeplessVolcano]

I see those leaves falling.....we miss them sometimes....they even make a sound....they sound like lost chances as they drop to an earth wishing for new beginnings.....and then winter comes.

Beautifully written

[Nisreen]

Thank you SV sometimes faith makes all the difference

[Annette Pisano-Higley]

Eloquent, contemplative, uplifting poem...lovely, graceful couplets with philosophy and beautiful imagery flowing into time and space, as we ourselves do...”Eternal Drawings” are what we make. “Happy mind”- happy life- yes. Excellent write my friend.

[B]

Thank you so much for your words

[Annette Pisano-Higley]

You are most welcome.:)

[lightsong]

the serenity, the calmness, the gentle beauty that all flow with Your words, fill our hearts with soft joy, our mind with ease, the photo... oh! perfectly enchanting to my senses, to match every word of Your poem, I can imagine old lovers walking hand in hand, in the wonder of nature they are lost, bond in hearts then they are lost together, joined mind in mind, bringing the years back, thoughts and feelings are shared, their wondrous love bonding with the nature's wonderment... how lovely and gentle Your poem is, how sweetly meaningful Your words are.

[B]

Thank you so much for your words

[.]

A very hopeful poem, madam.

Some lovely lines in this one, per usual. And as always written with a thoughtful hand and a child-like wonderance. The poetry has returned. Welcome back from the void.

Nice work.

[B]

Thank you Doodley

[‘Thoughts In Time..]

Beautiful- if only we could paint the eternal pictures of destiny and have it carried out accordingly- everything just falling into places as per- picture- wonderful words- we can only pray and hope for such peace love and unity🌹

[B]

Thank you for your words
Glad to have made such a lovely new friend

[‘Thoughts In Time’🌹]

My pleasure🌹