Slain Train or An Intentionally Bad Poem About a Train Crash

Slain Train or An Intentionally Bad Poem About a Train Crash

A Poem by Platus
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This poem was written for a contest that asked for intentionally bad work. It was inspired by the work of William McGonagall, the worst poet in the English language.

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The train was a pain

On the track’s strain

So it was slain

While the children were playing

And it wasn’t a game

And it really seemed lame

But the train was planed

Over the ocean

It fell into the water

And hit with a crash

And the passengers were slain

And they died


© 2010 Platus



Author's Note

Platus
Again, I am not actually a bad poet (well, not this bad at least).

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Amazing. It sounds almost like a very twisted nursery rhyme. I agree it's not exactly the best poem out there, but I like the refreshing way it was intentionally written.

Keep Writing. ^___^

Posted 6 Years Ago


This was hilarious! Especially that last line! Ironically, this is alot better than alot of 'bad' poems I've seen out there! XD Very in McGonagall's style, clever!

Posted 7 Years Ago


Lol thank you for submitting this to the Bad Poems contest :P This one is definitely one of the best worst poems I've gotten so far xD lmao

Posted 7 Years Ago


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