Did it hurt..?!

Did it hurt..?!

A Poem by Kevin Baptiste
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Him: "Did it hurt...?"
Her: "Did what hurt...?

Him: "When you fell from Heaven..."
Her: "Aww Kevin..."

Him: "Because your face is really f****d up......"
Her: "Umm, that wasn't funny..."

Him: "Sorry honey" :-)
Her: "......It really wasn't funny..."

Him: "Good thing I keep my day job and save my money..."
Her: "Why do you always do that...???"

Him: "Huh, what was that...???"
Her: "Why are you making a rhyme to everything I say...?"

Him: [Turns and looks away] ;-)

© 2010 Kevin Baptiste


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Awwh this was a sweet poem, and had a clever twist at the end... the way the description of his actions ryhmed were cool. Hmm i liked the way it was humerous, and not serious... like most of my poems :/ pha i really want to write some fun ones but im finding it hard. You're ma inspiration now, pha ;)

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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A very interesting poem and dialogue...Thank you for sharing...:)

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Humor huh. Lol i liked it it was entertaining and i enjoyed reading it. Nice job.

-SkyeBlanco

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

unique poetic piece. great!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Very Unique, Creative and Humorous.....I loved it.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Awwh this was a sweet poem, and had a clever twist at the end... the way the description of his actions ryhmed were cool. Hmm i liked the way it was humerous, and not serious... like most of my poems :/ pha i really want to write some fun ones but im finding it hard. You're ma inspiration now, pha ;)

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Clever to say the least. I love the humor in this piece. It's nice to read something with a different format for a change.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

LOL I spat my coffee at the screen on reading that 'fucked up face' line..

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

:)

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

:o)

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Funny...that was cool...Love it...

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on July 18, 2010
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Kevin Baptiste
Kevin Baptiste

Bronx, NY



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"It took Pleasure to make me and Pain to give birth to me......" - Kevin Baptiste. [Sophistication that Exceeds Classification] more..

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