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Silence of the Man

Silence of the Man

A Poem by PoemRodent
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Inner reflections at this moment

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Silence of the Man


Why speak words when you can feel me

Why say something when you can see

I hurt, I ache the want of something true

Shattered dreams of my insanity I drew


I've come to realize I am age drawn spent

Of the time I invested and words I lent

People care less how a heart can behold

They will sit and condemn in ten fold


My voice is just a whisper a fragile course

With no more power and age without force

My hand and my heart know of much gain

Yet in proving the fact is taking its strain


A plea for acceptance of who I am today

Seems avoiding and hardship in many play

I can't help but withdraw alone in cell

Mind withers thoughts of my living hell


Robert© - 2014


© 2014 PoemRodent



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powerful write, your speaking the words I cannot!

"A plea for acceptance of who I am today
Seems avoiding and hardship in many play
I can't help but withdraw alone in cell
Mind withers thoughts of my living hell"

As I hide beneath my feelings here you are courage within your words....


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powerful write, your speaking the words I cannot!

"A plea for acceptance of who I am today
Seems avoiding and hardship in many play
I can't help but withdraw alone in cell
Mind withers thoughts of my living hell"

As I hide beneath my feelings here you are courage within your words....


Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I think it's sad but somehow it makes you move forward. Or maybe I'm just speaking for myself haha .. anyhow, great job!

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

"People care less how a heart can behold
They will sit and condemn in ten fold"
Some good poetry today. Sometime all we have is silence. Life lead us to dead-end and few changes. The poem open the door to long conversation with no real answers. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote




Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on April 30, 2014
Last Updated on April 30, 2014
Tags: Reflections, inner self, anger, uncertainty

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I am duality at its best. A traveler and a self proclaimed pin cushion, the voodoo doll everyone enjoys to prick. Yet here I am writing on subjects that eat on my heart, mind and soul. Dark one day, h.. more..

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