Alone Again

Alone once again

Or so I thought

Alone with no gain

But a lot of loss 

Alone again with broken pieces

Alone again with no good reasons

To move on in life 

Or even try to collect

All of the broken pieces

And try again to find new reasons

As to why I am alone and fighting for attention

And why I am so lost in life and not to mention

Why no one cares to seek me out

But instead decide to doubt

My existence and importance

Without so much as a glance in my direction

Reviews

[polarize]

this was a really great piece! i really enjoy the repetition of "alone again" thank you for posting this!

[Tori Jones]

You're welcome, but I honestly don't see anything good about my writing...

[Ted Kniffen]

A well written description of the age-old struggle to redeem our dignity and heal our psyche after a breakup.
Good write.

[Tori Jones]

Thank you!

[Ardra]

All your words resonate with my feelings.... every time we hope to find a new reason to live...still each time the heart is shattered into tiny bits that it looses all hope..... Thanks for sharing it

[Tori Jones]

You're welcome!

[Twistedwords]

It's a well written piece! I'm excited to read more of your work!

[Tori Jones]

Thanks, you're very kind!

[Mystic]

Touched my heart!

[Tori Jones]

I'm glad, I put a lot of time and feelings into this poem...

[Moonlight]

This poem is a melancholic melody that you have written. It's sad yet beautiful and it weighs in the minds of the readers leaving a deep impression in the heart. Good write. :)

[Tori Jones]

Thank you...

[ManasaC]

This is brilliantly melancholic... I love it

[Tori Jones]

Thank you...

[Abhijit Das-The Poet]

Well written.Really nice.

[Tori Jones]

Thank you!

[Chris]

The very last line isn't needed...

The intent and intensity carried through and held its focus.

[Tori Jones]

Thx, for letting me know. I'll fix that right away!

[Chris]

I look forward to seeing more of your thoughts...

[Jamestown]

Well written and expressed,
all in do time hopefully you won't feel this way long,
Thanks for sharing and b-blessed!

[Tori Jones]

Thank you for such kind words...