Waiting

Waiting

A Poem by Serena

Darkness clouds my vision,

as I lay on the frozen ground

 

Blood seeps from the reopened wounds,

but none see my pain

 

His voice mocks me,

yet I can only lay there

 

The pain never comes,

no matter how many times the knife enters my body

 

I am numb

 

The tears cannot come,

locked away they laugh at my pain

 

He does nothing

 

Laughter haunts me day and night,

as I lay on that bed of ice

 

Darkness clouds my vision,

and I await Death's kiss


© 2013 Serena



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Reading this wonderfully, deliciously decadent poem is like being ravaged by a serial killer. You want to run, to turn away...but you find you can't make yourself do it. Just as in a dream, where you run and it almost seems like you're running in quicksand. His haunting laughter echoes and resonates behind imaginary audio, you can almost sense how close he is, but you are powerless to stop it.

Great work!

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Serena

4 Years Ago

:) Glad you enjoyed the darker emotions that surfaced in this poem. ^^ Hope my poems are even more e.. read more
Dean Kuch®

4 Years Ago

Actually, I found it very enjoyable now. Obviously, you've never read anything I've written, or you .. read more



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the way you create that feeling of fear as death creeps over us...and sneers at our agonizing pain, waiting...it sends chills down my spine. nicely written.

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Reading this wonderfully, deliciously decadent poem is like being ravaged by a serial killer. You want to run, to turn away...but you find you can't make yourself do it. Just as in a dream, where you run and it almost seems like you're running in quicksand. His haunting laughter echoes and resonates behind imaginary audio, you can almost sense how close he is, but you are powerless to stop it.

Great work!

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Serena

4 Years Ago

:) Glad you enjoyed the darker emotions that surfaced in this poem. ^^ Hope my poems are even more e.. read more
Dean Kuch®

4 Years Ago

Actually, I found it very enjoyable now. Obviously, you've never read anything I've written, or you .. read more

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