Meteor Shower

A Haiku

Friday night space lights

as we caress the hours

streaks across the sky.

Reviews

[Sami Khalil]

Wow. I love this one...Beautiful...:)

[Butch Decatoria]

Merci beau coup lol

[Sami Khalil]

Achante...:)

[just rose.]

These are great word choices with a sweeping revelation.

[Lori]

Nice. You've really captured the enigmatic spirit of haikus. So many poets seem not to understand that, and think a haiku is only about the 5-7-5 syllable count.