Illusions of Life

Illusions of Life

A Poem by RIch Hilliard
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A powerful poem

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A language without emotion is not a language at all
Just as pointless as the sounds and the syllables they fall!

Searching and searching, but i have not found 
A meaning to life in which my senses surround.

Concept after concept possibilities never end
Reaching the limit but the limit will bend

Never stop learning, never stop living 
God takes care of those who are caring and giving!

Willing to exceed but failing to execute
Shocking the system, lightning electrocute.

Illusions of life, leaving you destitute 
Illusions they are so let them not get the best of you!  

© 2010 RIch Hilliard


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simply loved it!!!! It's so realistic. :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


I like the meaning and message, but I would go over it a little more to perhaps choose other words that make it flow a little better.

You do have lovely ideas, and I can see after reviewing a lot of your pieces where you stretch yourself and are maturing. Keep writing!

Posted 13 Years Ago


Loved the rhyming scheme here.
Pondering imagery outstanding...

Posted 13 Years Ago


Great write here. We should be the lightening that electrocutes ideas in this world. Those who are different or are strong enough to stand out will give the world new innovations. Many inventors in the past were seen as crazy yet when their inventions worked people's ideas changed.

Posted 13 Years Ago


This write was something that brought my mind to a few subjects, but I am not sure which one would be apt to mention as my "final thought" on what this is about [my guess anyhow].

Powerful and thought provoking.

Posted 13 Years Ago


i like the concept of this poem alot!

Posted 13 Years Ago


YOU HAVE A WAY WITH WORDS! LIFE IS AN ILLUSION!! YOU SAID IT! GREAT POEM!1

Posted 13 Years Ago


This was an enjoyable poem. It pretty much sums up the difficulty involved in answering that one essential, unansweable quetion: "What is it really all about?"

Posted 13 Years Ago


Really good! not my favorite of yours, but still remarkable. You made the last two lines work really well, even though they dont ryhme dorectly. Nice job, keep it up(:

Posted 13 Years Ago


I like it, it's very relatable and kinda optamistic...

Posted 13 Years Ago



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Added on November 15, 2010
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RIch Hilliard
RIch Hilliard

Pittsburgh, PA



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